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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7080 on: October 22, 2011, 12:56:04 am »
Talk about a sloe eyed beauty
Full lips, silky hair, a nice firm booty!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7081 on: October 22, 2011, 09:06:12 am »
Talk about a sloe eyed beauty
Full lips, silky hair, a nice firm booty!
From those eyes the flashes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7082 on: October 22, 2011, 03:05:26 pm »



Talk about a sloe eyed beauty
Full lips, silky hair, a nice firm booty!
From those eyes the flashes
showing love not ashes



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7083 on: October 22, 2011, 05:15:26 pm »
Talk about a sloe eyed beauty
Full lips, silky hair, a nice firm booty!
From those eyes the flashes
showing love not ashes
Taught a gent not to fail in his duty.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7084 on: October 22, 2011, 06:42:24 pm »



LaShawn was not Lureens friend



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7085 on: October 23, 2011, 09:05:22 am »
LaShawn was not Lureens friend
Just a gal they picked up at the bend

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7086 on: October 23, 2011, 05:45:17 pm »
Hey guys,

I've been absent from this thread a little while, and I come back and see that you've been wonderfully prolific meanwhile!

That's great, and I love that so many limericks have been created here while I was away!

I especially love this one:

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I love to watch these things come about
The next line is always in doubt
What will it be?
Does that rhyme come in three?
Andrew, stay tuned and you will find out!




Just one thing; please remember the meter rules of limericks:

The first, second and fifth lines are long, and have between 8 and 11 syllables,
the third and fourth lines are short and have 5 or 6 syllables.

Otherwise it'll be Brokeback poems, not Brokeback limericks.   ;D

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7087 on: October 23, 2011, 05:49:59 pm »
LaShawn was not Lureens friend
Just a gal they picked up at the bend
Jack asked her to dance

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7088 on: October 23, 2011, 06:13:43 pm »
LaShawn was not Lureens friend
Just a gal they picked up at the bend
Jack asked her to dance
Randall looked askance



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7089 on: October 26, 2011, 07:50:50 pm »
LaShawn was not Lureens friend
Just a gal they picked up at the bend
Jack asked her to dance
Randall looked askance
But the jealousy was just pretend.