Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3234507 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7160 on: January 14, 2012, 02:24:37 pm »
Ennis drove across the grieving plain,
With tears in his eyes and a heart full o' pain,
Two shirts in a bag
Inhaling a drag
Thinking - what had he lost, what did he gain?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7161 on: January 14, 2012, 02:35:41 pm »
Ennis drove across the grieving plain,
With tears in his eyes and a heart full o' pain,
Two shirts in a bag
Inhaling a drag
Nothing would ever look right again

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7162 on: January 14, 2012, 03:53:51 pm »
Great alternative ending to the limerick, Monika!

And welcome to the limerick thread, don't think I've seen you here before?

Wanna start a new one?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7163 on: January 15, 2012, 08:24:23 pm »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7164 on: January 15, 2012, 11:24:02 pm »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,
And Wondered if Jack was doing the same

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7165 on: January 16, 2012, 12:02:54 am »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,
And Wondered if Jack was doing the same,
He filled out his bracket,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7166 on: January 16, 2012, 02:52:03 pm »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,

LMAO Donna!!!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7167 on: January 16, 2012, 02:56:18 pm »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,
And Wondered if Jack was doing the same,
He filled out his bracket,
hoping for no racket

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7168 on: January 16, 2012, 03:35:31 pm »
Ennis turned on the college basketball game,
And Wondered if Jack was doing the same,
He filled out his bracket,
hoping for no racket
Thought lovin' Jack makes basketball seem tame!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #7169 on: January 16, 2012, 04:41:55 pm »
Good one luvly!   :-*

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