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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2020 on: October 24, 2006, 12:07:51 pm »
He felt he could paw the white outa the moon,
As he rode back to the sheep, he began to croon
The woolies looked and were amused

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2021 on: October 24, 2006, 12:18:01 pm »
He felt he could paw the white outa the moon,
As he rode back to the sheep, he began to croon
The woolies looked and were amused
As Ennis sat among them smiling yet bemused
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2022 on: October 24, 2006, 12:25:24 pm »
He felt he could paw the white outa the moon,
As he rode back to the sheep, he began to croon
The woolies looked and were amused
As Ennis sat among them smiling yet bemused
Not long and he and Jack would spoon...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2023 on: October 24, 2006, 12:31:01 pm »

More than 2000 posts on this thread! Yay!  :D

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2024 on: October 24, 2006, 12:32:58 pm »
"Get the f**k of of me" With tears he said.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2025 on: October 24, 2006, 05:05:33 pm »
"Get the f**k of of me" With tears he said.
The "quit you" pierced his heart - it bled

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2026 on: October 25, 2006, 01:41:22 am »
"Get the f**k of of me" with tears he said.
The "quit you" pierced his heart - it bled
As he fell those familar arms of steel held so tight
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2027 on: October 25, 2006, 02:39:59 am »
"Get the f**k of of me" with tears he said.
The "quit you" pierced his heart - it bled
As he fell those familar arms of steel held so tight
They clung together with all of their might,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2028 on: October 25, 2006, 04:25:45 am »
"Get the f**k of of me" with tears he said.
The "quit you" pierced his heart - it bled
As he fell those familar arms of steel held so tight
They clung together with all of their might,
Though both their hearts felt heavy as lead.  :'(


And another. From a happier time...

In the Siesta Motel they kissed tenderly,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2029 on: October 25, 2006, 08:50:25 am »
In the Siesta Motel they kissed tenderly,
their separate lives now seemed heresy