Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3182355 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2040 on: October 31, 2006, 03:49:58 pm »
That fishin' line aint never got wet,
Not since you wrote back sayin' 'You bet'.
Our time together was ours you and me.
For once in our life, we felt so free,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2041 on: October 31, 2006, 03:55:34 pm »
That fishin' line aint never got wet,
Not since you wrote back sayin' 'You bet'.
Our time together was ours you and me.
For once in our life, we felt so free,
From that time so long ago in our  tent
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2042 on: October 31, 2006, 04:08:47 pm »
Another ..

Before Ennis, Jack went down on a bended knee



(I am kinda thinking "down on bended knee" as in proposing marriage, but feel free to interpret as you wish .. lol )


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2043 on: October 31, 2006, 04:12:42 pm »
Before Ennis, Jack went down on a bended knee
There was somethin' in his pants, perhaps a bee!




(I am kinda thinking "down on bended knee" as in proposing marriage, but feel free to interpret as you wish .. lol )


Sorry Milli!  ;D

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2044 on: October 31, 2006, 04:20:57 pm »
Before Ennis, Jack went down on a bended knee
There was somethin' in his pants, perhaps a bee!
Come here Ennis, somethin' I want to say

Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2045 on: October 31, 2006, 04:25:53 pm »
I knew Anke would have to spoil it ..  :laugh:




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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2046 on: October 31, 2006, 04:28:11 pm »
Before Ennis, Jack went down on a bended knee
There was somethin' in his pants, perhaps a bee!
Come here Ennis, somethin' I want to say
Jack said that, in his cool, sexy way,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2047 on: October 31, 2006, 04:33:53 pm »
Before Ennis, Jack went down on a bended knee
There was somethin' in his pants, perhaps a bee!
Come here Ennis, somethin' I want to say
Jack said that, in his cool, sexy way,
Hold on dude, I'll just take a pee!

Again: sorry folks!  ;)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2048 on: October 31, 2006, 04:47:52 pm »
Ennis pulled off his belt, and lowered his jeans,




(feeling in a "nasty" mood)
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2049 on: October 31, 2006, 04:53:10 pm »
Ennis pulled off his belt, and lowered his jeans,
As a wind blew, quite smelling like beans...



(feeling in a "nasty" mood)

Me too!  ;D