Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3182008 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1850 on: October 02, 2006, 05:53:36 pm »
When Ennis felt Jack's hand on his most private parts,
Little did he know, they were two loving hearts,
His heart raced, his arousal grew,
His manhood strained, for its goal so true,
And from that moment on, their love story starts.


He felt his breath, he felt his body,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1851 on: October 02, 2006, 06:12:52 pm »
He felt his breath, he felt his body,
His mien was calm, sweet, never haughty,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1852 on: October 04, 2006, 08:18:00 pm »
He felt his breath, he felt his body,
His mien was calm,sweet, never haugty,
The tender touch, the lasting kiss,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1853 on: October 04, 2006, 11:54:51 pm »
He felt his breath, he felt his body,
His mien was calm,sweet, never haugty,
The tender touch, the lasting kiss,
The gentle caress, what heavenly bliss!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1854 on: October 05, 2006, 09:18:44 am »
He felt his breath, he felt his body,
His mien was calm,sweet, never haugty,
The tender touch, the lasting kiss,
The gentle caress, what heavenly bliss!
So he decided tonight to be naughty.
« Last Edit: October 05, 2006, 12:16:21 pm by Scott6373 »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1855 on: October 05, 2006, 11:41:47 am »
Trying another...

The wind flew cold and dry over Lightning Flat's plain,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1856 on: October 05, 2006, 11:56:22 am »
Trying another...

The wind flew cold and dry over Lightning Flat's plain,
As Ennis drove to Jack boyhood home in grief and pain
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1857 on: October 05, 2006, 06:22:50 pm »
The wind flew cold and dry over Lightning Flat's plain,
As Ennis drove to Jack's boyhood home in grief and pain
He wondered how he'd like meeting Ma and Pa Twist

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1858 on: October 05, 2006, 06:56:12 pm »
The wind flew cold and dry over Lightning Flat's plain,
As Ennis drove to Jack's boyhood home in grief and pain
He wondered how he'd like meeting Ma and Pa Twist
Went saw his room, he knew what Jack felt for him was not in jest.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1859 on: October 05, 2006, 07:00:11 pm »
The wind flew cold and dry over Lightning Flat's plain,
As Ennis drove to Jack's boyhood home in grief and pain
He wondered how he'd like meeting Ma and Pa Twist
Went saw his room, he knew what Jack felt for him was not in jest.
Then went home to make his trailer a fane.

How's about...

Alma knew nothing of the mountain