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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #90 on: August 10, 2006, 07:08:21 pm »
Jessy ~ The interlude chapter was great!

I was LOL in some places: the expired aspirin, the skunk game .. so funny!
Thank you lady!  Great work!  ;)

Glad to hear you enjoyed it Lucise!  It was my attempt at something funny and light hearted before more angst continued.  It's good to hear everyone liked it, I thought some might think it a little bizarre...

And it really is bizarre, but bizarre can be good, no?

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #91 on: August 10, 2006, 07:19:42 pm »
Glad to hear you enjoyed it Lucise!  It was my attempt at something funny and light hearted before more angst continued.  It's good to hear everyone liked it, I thought some might think it a little bizarre...

More angst ahead you say .. *deep sigh*

Bizarre?? Heck no!!  ;)


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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #92 on: August 11, 2006, 05:35:12 am »
.....before more angst continued. 
And it really is bizarre, but bizarre can be good, no?

I second what Milli said: more angst? *very deep sigh*  Don't get too hard on them and us.

I liked the interlude. The skunk, Ennis falling asleep (Jack:“I’ll tell you what, you owe me one big time in the mornin’.”)


I liked especially this snippet of dialogue:

“Jest consider it a endearment.”

Jack smiled wide. “All right. I can live with that.”

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #93 on: August 11, 2006, 07:34:28 am »
I agree, I really liked how you used the dialogue to show us how comfortable they are to be together. Even if they have only known each other for a few weeks!

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #94 on: August 22, 2006, 05:02:25 pm »
For all fans of LMTYD:
Chapter 18 is up!  :) :) :)
Actually it's part 1 of chapter 18.

It's here:

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/23130.html#cutid1

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #95 on: August 22, 2006, 06:23:43 pm »
Thanks for letting us know!

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #96 on: August 22, 2006, 09:11:28 pm »
For all fans of LMTYD:
Chapter 18 is up!  :) :) :)
Actually it's part 1 of chapter 18.

It's here:

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/23130.html#cutid1

Man you guys are on the ball!  I was just coming to update!  And it's been done for me!  Thanks much, all!  Especially Penthesila1

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #97 on: August 25, 2006, 07:02:30 am »
Please...please...please... don't wait too long with posting part 2!

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #98 on: August 25, 2006, 08:57:15 am »
Please...please...please... don't wait too long with posting part 2!

Ditto! I love this story  :D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #99 on: September 01, 2006, 05:26:27 pm »
Hey there!

Just to let you all know, chapter 18 part 2 is up!!! Sorry about the wait!

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/24035.html#cutid1

Thanks for all your support!