Author Topic: A Love Born From Steel - Ongoing Discussion  (Read 76530 times)

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A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #220 on: May 29, 2006, 08:08:17 am »
Hooray for three day weekends and fanfic authors who never rest (that would be me).

Chapter 16 is up for your reading pleasure:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/17/

Comments and feedback are welcome. Please consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks again everyone, for your support...

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #221 on: May 29, 2006, 08:09:00 am »
Hooray for three day weekends and fanfic authors who never rest (that would be me).

Chapter 16 is up for your reading pleasure:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/17/

Comments and feedback are welcome. Please consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks again everyone, for your support...

Leslie
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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #222 on: May 29, 2006, 08:26:20 am »
WOO HOO!

I saw it one minute after you posted it!    LOL.

Hot of the press, just the way I like it!!

Another great read Leslie!    Kept me on the edge of my seat!

<smooch>  :-*   David

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #223 on: May 29, 2006, 11:19:38 am »
Leslie - Thank you!  :)


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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #224 on: May 29, 2006, 02:09:58 pm »
yeah, I'd like to slice him fine, hang him, and cure him...not as good as elk, but what the hell. Perople like that take pleasure in causing pain, they really do. You can always see them smiling inside while they tell you where to get off.

It's intreresting how the chatacters under pressure veer apart, and rejoin . Good old E...

hey, look ma, no sex...

Great chapter.

And for those of you saying they still look just the same, how the hell could they? They AREN'T the same anymore.

Oh hell, I don't want to fight about it. Everyone sees what they see...
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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #225 on: May 29, 2006, 03:56:48 pm »
Hey Leslie, thought you'd like to know that your story's been posted over at the livejournal brokeback fan fiction community... here's the link, just scroll down a bit and you'll see the entry

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/

see, you must be good, your story is getting around  ;)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #226 on: May 29, 2006, 04:56:23 pm »
This woman is THE BOMB!! :-*

Keep 'em coming.
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Re: A Love Born From Steel: CHAPTER 16
« Reply #227 on: May 29, 2006, 06:05:01 pm »
Hey Leslie, thought you'd like to know that your story's been posted over at the livejournal brokeback fan fiction community... here's the link, just scroll down a bit and you'll see the entry

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/

see, you must be good, your story is getting around  ;)

Thanks for letting me know about this. For the life of me, I cannot figure out LiveJournal (although I have figured out how to read Louise's story). This poster told me she was putting up the link but thanks, Mandy, for directing me to it.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #228 on: May 30, 2006, 01:54:58 am »
Leslie,

This story is a masterpiece!  That was an excellent chapter.  Thank you!  :)

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #229 on: May 30, 2006, 05:20:26 am »
Leslie,

This story is a masterpiece!  That was an excellent chapter.  Thank you!  :)

Thank you, Eric!

Leslie
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