Great chapter, Leslie--I like its quiet, with only a few exclamations. There's nothing you do here that coulodn't go on fanfaiction, that I can see---did I ness somethning? Left a review over there, but don't think it was easy. and I couldn't correct typos.
As I guess most of you know, I don't take cold showeers...
"As I you"? Pretty fancy manipuilation of the King's English, for what its worth.
So: is that the end? the previous chapter pretty much summed up the summer, but I thought you said rwo or three more. Anyway, I'm willing to read another 45, unless the army gets me.
Thanks, Leslie, for a great story!