Author Topic: Zero at the Bone by MadLori  (Read 70804 times)

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2006, 05:29:44 pm »
Wow, I am really being pulled into this story, Lori, this was another wonderful chapter....

Quite a workload you've got there with also writing TCJ!  ;)

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #21 on: November 12, 2006, 10:41:03 pm »
Ample make this bed.
Make this bed with awe;
In it wait till judgment break
Excellent and fair.

Be its mattress straight,
Be its pillow round;
Let no sunrise' yellow noise
Interrupt this ground

    -Emily Dickenson (anyone remermber :"Sophie's Choice?".
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #22 on: November 13, 2006, 12:40:31 am »
I'm witchez...soooch versatility!
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #23 on: November 13, 2006, 04:47:39 pm »
Ample make this bed.
Make this bed with awe;
In it wait till judgment break
Excellent and fair.

Be its mattress straight,
Be its pillow round;
Let no sunrise' yellow noise
Interrupt this ground

    -Emily Dickenson (anyone remermber :"Sophie's Choice?".

Thanks for the poem!  I think "Till Judgment Break" would make an excelelnt title for a sequel, don't you?
Jack:  I could kick your ass any day of the week.
Ennis:  Then the weeks where you live must have a No Fuckin' Way Day.

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #24 on: November 13, 2006, 05:05:32 pm »
Yeah...
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #25 on: November 13, 2006, 05:44:11 pm »
Lori, I just found this fanfic yesterday. It's fantastic!!! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #26 on: November 14, 2006, 12:43:20 am »
Jack:  I could kick your ass any day of the week.
Ennis:  Then the weeks where you live must have a No Fuckin' Way Day.

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #27 on: November 14, 2006, 02:11:56 am »
So it is...and somewhat the worse for wear physically, D and Jack are  on the move some more.

Unless you're feuding, Leslie is a nurse, could help with medical stuff--which I didn't even notice was amiss.

Why does my comment say it's 6 tomorrow morning, when it's 10 tonight my time (California)?

Crisp ands clean and keep 'em coming!
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #28 on: November 14, 2006, 08:56:41 am »
Of course we're not feuding, Julie...Lori and I get along just fine.

Great chapter...I am really getting into this story. Looking forward to the next update.

And the medical stuff all sounded fine, except he wouldn't inject Bacitracin in and around the wound. Bacitracin doesn't come in an injectable form. More likely Jack would've given D a big shot of penicillin in his butt...which would have given Jack an excuse to look at D's butt! LOL

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #29 on: November 14, 2006, 08:59:37 am »
More likely Jack would've given D a big shot of penicillin in his butt...which would have given Jack an excuse to look at D's butt! LOL

I think Lori needs to correct that immediately!  ;D  haha....what a scene that would have been!