I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey

[bailey]

I really, really like this story.  Thank you for such frequent updates.
Ennis is working hard to prove himself to Jack.  Want them back together so bad, but it will have to be at Jack's pace.  Can't blame him there ! 

Karen

Thank you for reading and letting me know what you thought of it.  I'm glad you're not too frustrated with the pace, God knows I am.  I'm dying to write them together again, but as you say, it's at Jack's pace now.  Ennis no longer has final say over when and how often they meet.  Hope you like how it develops.

[bailey]

I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/83627.html#cutid1

Chapter Twenty-Five: Hard Promises
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
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Growin' up, you don't see the writin' on the wall
Passin' by, movin' straight ahead you knew it all
But maybe sometime if you feel the pain
You'll find you're all alone
Everything has changed.

Play the game; you know you can't quit until it's won
Soldier on; only you can do what must be done
You know in some way
You're a lot like me
You're just a prisoner
And you're tryin' to break free.
John Parr, “St. Elmo’s Fire”
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[Penthesilea]

Already the next chapter. You're spoiling us, Bailey  . And I love being spoiled  , so thanks for the extra-quick update  .
(Or did you fear the readers would jump at each others throats if you wouldn't give 'em another chapter to distract 'em from the hoopla about the last one?       )

[littleguitar]

what was the hooplah about the last one?? I always miss things 

I loved this chapter, Bailey! and I need to go back to work but I couldn't resist commenting here. I loved Bobby in this chapter and the convo between him and Jack, very well done. And I love seeing that Jack and Ennis are slowly making their way back to each other and that, even though they've both changed, sometimes for Jack it's like having that best friend again.

And, I love your quick updates, spoil away! 

[bailey]

I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/83984.html#cutid1

Chapter Twenty-Six: The Heart Perceives Ere the Mind Comprehends
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
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Anyone who ever loved could look at me
And know that I love you
Anyone who ever dreamed could look at me
And know I dream of you
Knowing I love you so
Anyone who had a heart
Would take me in his arms and love me, too
Burt Bacharach, “Anyone Who Had a Heart”
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[cwby30]

Morning. 

Liked this chapter...and like the pace at which you're going.  Weeks go by, work gets done, Bobby has started rehab, and the guys are moving closer emotionally.  Jack especially is moving...fighting against what he wants, to be sure it will be strong enough this time.  Ennis fighting to continue his growth as a person, for Jack and for himself, and to prove to Jack that his love is strong enough this time. 

Like your Lureen. Strong business woman, so why take it from Old Man Twist?  Would like to have Parkie and Freddy visit, too.  Now, that would be something! Old Man Twist would really go apoplectic over that!  But, it would validate to Jack what Ennis has told him, and rebuild more of the trust that Jack wants and needs.  Now as to Danny...

Thanks for the quick update.  Also posted something on Brokeback_Slash.

[bailey]

Morning. 

Liked this chapter...and like the pace at which you're going.  Weeks go by, work gets done, Bobby has started rehab, and the guys are moving closer emotionally.  Jack especially is moving...fighting against what he wants, to be sure it will be strong enough this time.  Ennis fighting to continue his growth as a person, for Jack and for himself, and to prove to Jack that his love is strong enough this time. 

Like your Lureen. Strong business woman, so why take it from Old Man Twist? Would like to have Parkie and Freddy visit, too.  Now, that would be something! Old Man Twist would really go apoplectic over that!  But, it would validate to Jack what Ennis has told him, and rebuild more of the trust that Jack wants and needs.  Now as to Danny...

Thanks for the quick update.  Also posted something on Brokeback_Slash.

Thank you so much for your comments.  Are you reading my mind?  See bolded sentence above.

I'm glad you like how these old boys are finally becoming men.    I wish they'd move faster though.  I want them together and happy, but I think it's gonna be a little while longer, and even then, it won't be a bed of roses.  Thanks for sticking me and my pacing in this one.  My stuff usually moves a lot faster, but there are things here that can't be rushed, as you noted, like Bobby's rehab.

[coffeecat33]

I'm enjoying the story so far, Bailey! 

cc33 / Leslie

[bailey]

I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/84287.html#cutid1

Chapter Twenty-Seven: The Crazy Few
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx and the fine actors that portrayed them on screen.
My profound thanks to Jean.
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Some people are crazy, when they never give in
When they know they are loosing, there's no way they can win
But they'll never sleep easy knowing they didn't try
And they never stop trying, 'til the day that they die

 So here's to your heart of gold
The very soul, that won't be told that you are loosing
And keeps you coming back
Trying again
And here's to the crazy few, the likes of you
People who are so confusing
But from small beginnings
Seem to wind up winning in the end
John Dawson Read, “Some People Are Crazy”
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[karen1129]

this story is my Crack right now.  Update today???  LOL

Karen