Author Topic: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm  (Read 36319 times)

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #90 on: April 19, 2007, 11:18:43 pm »
Thanks for the update Cristine!

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #91 on: April 19, 2007, 11:21:19 pm »
You're so welcome, Amanda!
Nice to 'see' you.   :)    :-*

Cristine  :)
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Warmest Week of the Year - Part 7B (Sequel to "Pine Creek")
« Reply #92 on: May 08, 2007, 05:16:38 am »


NEW   CHAPTER   POSTING


“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part  7B  (Sequel to “Pine Creek")


“The man tasted of loneliness and need, strength and fear, desire and denial. Ennis’ conflicting emotions were always so prevalent in his kiss, Jack tasting the pain and the agony right alongside the need and the joy. It was a palpable experience that brought Jack to his knees every single time they kissed, no matter if he was sitting or standing.”


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Thank you.   

Cristine   :)




"The room stank of semen and smoke and sweat and whiskey, of old carpet and sour hay, saddle leather, shit and cheap soap.  Ennis lay spread-eagled, spent and wet, breathing deep, still half tumescent, Jack blowing forceful cigarette clouds like whale spouts..." – Annie Proulx

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #93 on: May 08, 2007, 07:30:27 am »

NEW   CHAPTER   POSTING

. . . .
“The man tasted of loneliness and need, strength and fear, desire and denial. Ennis’ conflicting emotions were always so prevalent in his kiss, Jack tasting the pain and the agony right alongside the need and the joy. It was a palpable experience that brought Jack to his knees every single time they kissed, no matter if he was sitting or standing.”  ..... 

God, this paragraph alone is awesome.  I'm so looking forward to this newest chapter . . . as always!  (Once I saw your drabble, I was hoping this wouldn't be far behind!  :) )

Thanks, Cristine
Marie
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm / WWotY - Part 7B
« Reply #94 on: May 08, 2007, 01:44:49 pm »
God, this paragraph alone is awesome.  I'm so looking forward to this newest chapter . . . as always!  (Once I saw your drabble, I was hoping this wouldn't be far behind!  :) )

Thanks, Cristine
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Ah, thanks Marie.    :D

Right now, I wish I didn't have to do anything else but sit and write about our boys all day.    lol   Their love is so strong in my soul right now.  And the dialogue...well, you'll see in this chapter that Jack in particular has so much to say to me...just won't shut up.   ;)   hehehe

But all that other stuff that I have to do every day keeps gettin' in the way.  ;)    lol

Take care, sweetie.
Hope you enjoy the chapter.

Cristine    :)   
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #95 on: May 10, 2007, 05:43:54 pm »
HOLEEEEEEEE COW!!!
I'm just on part three of the motel part.
This is awesome.
Haunted, you are a VERY gifted writer.
The sex isn't gratuitous, it is so well balanced by their love.
I think it's an awsome read!!
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #96 on: May 10, 2007, 05:58:09 pm »
HOLEEEEEEEE COW!!!
I'm just on part three of the motel part.
This is awesome.
Haunted, you are a VERY gifted writer.
The sex isn't gratuitous, it is so well balanced by their love.
I think it's an awsome read!!

Hi there, loneleeb,    :)

Thank you so much!  You are so kind to let me know you're reading and enjoying my story.   :)

I wrote that one back in December, and it was my very first fanfic EVER, so I'm always a little surprised and very flattered to find out that more people are still finding it and enjoying it.   :)    Thanks so much.   Hope you enjoy the rest as well.
 
(Two people told me they had to lay down after reading Part 4.  LOL  ;) 
So I always feel like I should warn people in advance.  LOL  )   ;)

Thanks again,

'haunted'

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"The room stank of semen and smoke and sweat and whiskey, of old carpet and sour hay, saddle leather, shit and cheap soap.  Ennis lay spread-eagled, spent and wet, breathing deep, still half tumescent, Jack blowing forceful cigarette clouds like whale spouts..." – Annie Proulx

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #97 on: May 11, 2007, 12:35:06 pm »
Hi there, loneleeb,    :)

Thank you so much!  You are so kind to let me know you're reading and enjoying my story.   :)

I wrote that one back in December, and it was my very first fanfic EVER, so I'm always a little surprised and very flattered to find out that more people are still finding it and enjoying it.   :)    Thanks so much.   Hope you enjoy the rest as well.
 
(Two people told me they had to lay down after reading Part 4.  LOL  ;) 
So I always feel like I should warn people in advance.  LOL  )   ;)

Thanks again,

'haunted'

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No , thank you!
It really is a beautiful story. :)
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #98 on: May 11, 2007, 01:11:32 pm »
No , thank you!
It really is a beautiful story. :)

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"The room stank of semen and smoke and sweat and whiskey, of old carpet and sour hay, saddle leather, shit and cheap soap.  Ennis lay spread-eagled, spent and wet, breathing deep, still half tumescent, Jack blowing forceful cigarette clouds like whale spouts..." – Annie Proulx

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Warmest Week of the Year - Part 7C
« Reply #99 on: May 15, 2007, 03:06:57 am »

NEW   CHAPTER   POSTING


“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part  7C  (Sequel to “Pine Creek”)


"During such moments, Jack was afraid to close his eyes, breathe too quickly, or think too hard…for if he did any of those things, he might miss something significant. Time with Ennis had a way of confusing his senses. Their days together were painfully finite, yet beautifully eternal at the same time…limited to so few risings and settings of the sun, and yet so continuously timeless in spirit."


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Thank you.   :)

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"The room stank of semen and smoke and sweat and whiskey, of old carpet and sour hay, saddle leather, shit and cheap soap.  Ennis lay spread-eagled, spent and wet, breathing deep, still half tumescent, Jack blowing forceful cigarette clouds like whale spouts..." – Annie Proulx