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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #560 on: March 06, 2007, 02:39:06 pm »
Howdy drabble-lovers!  :)

This is probably unlike Jack and Ennis, but it was fun to write..   ;DNot t'night..


Jack felt Ennis’ hot breath on his neck, his swollen member rubbing against the back of Jack's thigh.

“Ennis.  What’re ya doin’?” he managed in a sleep-clogged voice.

“What d’ya think I’m doing?”  Ennis asked, pushing closer into Jack’s back.

“Well, not t’night honey, I’ve got a headache..”

“A whut?” Ennis raised his head...


And a great deal of fun to read!!!   lol   Nice job.   ;) 
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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #561 on: March 06, 2007, 02:43:36 pm »
And a great deal of fun to read!!!   lol   Nice job.   ;) 
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I second that  -- but, you can't leave us there.  We want "the thing!"  LOL!!!

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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #562 on: March 06, 2007, 02:49:34 pm »


Aww nice return to brokeback,,,



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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #563 on: March 06, 2007, 03:07:36 pm »
Lol..cheers ladies!

You know I'd tell ya what "the thing" is, but Ennis would have a calf if I did ..  :-X ;D


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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #564 on: March 06, 2007, 03:08:23 pm »
I second that  -- but, you can't leave us there.  We want "the thing!"  LOL!!!

Thanks!
Marie

YES!!!    I vote that you give us  "The Thing"  in your next drabble.     LOL
All in favor...    ;)

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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #565 on: March 06, 2007, 03:11:45 pm »
Lol..cheers ladies!

You know I'd tell ya what "the thing" is, but Ennis would have a calf if I did ..  :-X ;D

Well, shoot.   ;)
Maybe he doesn't have to know.   ;)   hehehe
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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #566 on: March 06, 2007, 04:35:22 pm »
Well, shoot.   ;)
Maybe he doesn't have to know.   ;)   hehehe
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k, I'll work on it, er him, er .. Well you know what I mean!  ;D


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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #567 on: March 06, 2007, 05:07:09 pm »
k, I'll work on it, er him, er .. Well you know what I mean!  ;D

 ;D   hehehe
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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #568 on: March 06, 2007, 06:06:05 pm »
Great drabbles today, I know this dosn't compare but here goes



December 10, 1977

Dear Daddy,

I am writing this letter to you because Momma said that you wont be coming back for a while.  Please Daddy, we need you to come.   Daddy why did you leave on Thanksgiving without saying goodbye to me and Jenny?  You will come for Christmas, wont you?  Me and Jenny miss you so much alredy.  Momma aint no fun, she always says she got a headache and she stays in bed all day.  Monroe was going to fix up the room for the baby but he sits in front of the tv after he comes home from the store.

Jenny is all determined to get a locket for Christmas, a gold one, she says she will buy it for herself if she dont get one.  Momma and Monroe will just forget and Jenny says she wants to put your picture it, so she wont forget what you look like if you don’t come back.   But she only has $1.63 in the piggy bank you got her.  I dont need no picture.  I see you in my head.

Daddy what did you fight about on Thanksgiving?  Jenny and me ask Momma all the time but she says were too young.  But I’m not.  Was it something about your friend Jack the one who came to see you that day when me and Jenny were with you?  I hid one day and I heard Momma and Monroe talkin, somethin about your friend and Momma started cryin again.  Daddy why, I don’t understand.  But I don’t care. I thouht he looked real nice.

Daddy, I gotta go now, Momma called me. Wants me to help with supper, she dont do nothing no more.

Daddy please come soon

Love,

Junior



(Note, all typos intentional)
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Re: The Bettermost Drabblefest: Please Join In!
« Reply #569 on: March 06, 2007, 06:21:13 pm »
Great drabbles today, I know this dosn't compare but here goes


I beg to differ girl!
That was so cute!

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Jenny is all determined to get a locket for Christmas, a gold one, she says she will buy it for herself if she dont get one.

Awww..
Cheers!  :-*