Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 4051606 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5750 on: October 20, 2006, 09:40:47 pm »
I loved the title of the last chapter!! What a wonderful play on words!!

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I am wondering HOW exactly Ennis is going to explain leaving Ellery cuffed---and how he is going to apologize for it.   I also think that is most of the reason Ellery unloaded on Dupree---I think all that worry/fright adrenaline of possibly getting caught literally with his pants down, and no way to be able to pull them up--got him going, and Dupree got what he would have given Ennis--considering Ennis told him he would never leave him trussed up again like that due to interuptions.   sex play like they are doing requires trust, and Ennis is not living up to his end of the bargain.  I would hate to see Ellery not want to play anymore cause he can't trust Ennis to stay there and take care of him first.

Dupree may have been wrong to come over after Ellery told him about the romantic moment--but I think Ellery being nasty was mostly left over fright response.   Hope he got it out of his system and will be able to talk about it without yelling too much at Ennis.

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5751 on: October 20, 2006, 09:44:57 pm »
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I think Ennis was fixated on the fact that his own clothes were in the other room and he had to leave the bedroom to get dressed. Since he was then half way to the front door he was tempted to answer it. This probably won't wash with Ellery though.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5752 on: October 20, 2006, 10:31:15 pm »
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Well Ennis wanting to be dressed is nice, but Ellery didn't even have the opportunity to cover up.
The only thing that gets me is Don't they have a dresser with a couple changes of clothes in the bedroom???  I mean, clean or dirty who doesn't have SOME clothes in the bedroom, just cause they may not be the clothes he took off before they got fancy.  LOL
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5753 on: October 20, 2006, 10:52:24 pm »
Nip and F**k

Ennis and Ellery love to play
some naughty games in bed
Ellery never knows what’s coming
Ennis keeps their sex life humming
with things he dreams up in his head

It’s a rollercoaster ride
With thrills and spills on either side
Facing upwards, downwards sideways
Ennis does him every whichways
El can’t even catch his breath
as Ennis f**ks him half to death

As Ennis mucks out mares each day
he dreams up new exciting ways
to play with toys and various props
and naughty roles like sexy cops
No matter what the aim is clear
To get his c**k up Ellery’s rear!

Then in one game of nip and f**k
E and E ran out of luck
The handcuffs slipped
and Ennis nipped
a tender area that he’d whipped
Ellery yelled out loud and bucked
expelling Ennis who then slipped
and sprained his cock – their sex life f**ked!

While Ennis nursed his injured d**k
and Ellery called in feeling sick
They drowned their sorrows drinking scotch
all the while both keeping watch
for signs of life in Ennis’ pr**k!



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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5754 on: October 20, 2006, 11:28:36 pm »
Re:  Nip and F**k

Oh, that was outstanding - what a gift you have!

Really got a kick out of it.   ;D :laugh:
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5755 on: October 21, 2006, 02:08:54 am »
No matter what the aim is clear
To get his c**k up Ellery’s rear!
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What a great poem!  Thanks for my best laugh of the day.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5756 on: October 21, 2006, 02:33:09 am »
mm, great poem as always.  Thanks for these hilarious peoms.

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5757 on: October 21, 2006, 02:37:09 am »
I've been thinking ... to even things up, next time Ellery should insist that Ennis be bottom, handcuffed and wearing only cowboy hat and boots  - plus maybe his buckle on a new belt.

Ellery could pretend he is the sheriff of Wild West Laramie rounding up the aptly named Wild Bill Hickock (maybe renamed Wild Ennis Hickock!) and throwing him into the caboose.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5758 on: October 21, 2006, 03:54:33 am »
I've been thinking ... to even things up, next time Ellery should insist that Ennis be bottom, handcuffed and wearing only cowboy hat and boots  - plus maybe his buckle on a new belt.

Ellery could pretend he is the sheriff of Wild West Laramie rounding up the aptly named Wild Bill Hickock (maybe renamed Wild Ennis Hickock!) and throwing him into the caboose.

Ooooh, I like this!  ;D

And I absolutely love that poem, as always. A GREAT start to my day  :)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5759 on: October 21, 2006, 04:30:38 am »

I am wondering HOW exactly Ennis is going to explain leaving Ellery cuffed---and how he is going to apologize for it.   I also think that is most of the reason Ellery unloaded on Dupree---I think all that worry/fright adrenaline of possibly getting caught literally with his pants down, and no way to be able to pull them up--got him going, and Dupree got what he would have given Ennis--considering Ennis told him he would never leave him trussed up again like that due to interuptions.   sex play like they are doing requires trust, and Ennis is not living up to his end of the bargain.  I would hate to see Ellery not want to play anymore cause he can't trust Ennis to stay there and take care of him first.


I think that you're totally right there. Ellery must have extremely vunerable and exposed, and Dupree bore the brunt of that. It is a trust thing as you said. Also, Ellery admitted he has a temper when he was telling Ennis about his less attractive traits.

Now to add to that he's been confronted with that video tape. Ellery must be feeling a bit knocked off course right now.

Ennis has a lot of making up to do, and support to provide methinks. Hope it hasn't spoiled their exchange of tokens. Because that was lovely.

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