Author Topic: The "ABCs of BBM": Round 965! (Rules in first post)  (Read 5554083 times)

Offline memento

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"F" is flirts
« Reply #13620 on: June 17, 2007, 10:30:27 am »
Girl 1 flirts with Ennis when she says: "You sure? (seductive) We love to share."

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"G" is gravestone
« Reply #13621 on: June 17, 2007, 10:53:49 am »
We do not see the scene where Ennis, departing the Twist home, goes by to see where Jack's gravestone might be placed on the grieving plain.


EXT: OUTSIDE LIGHTNING FLAT, WYOMING: TWIST HOMESTEAD: DIRT DRIVEWAY: DAY: 1982:
ENNIS is in his pickup, bumping down the washboard road.
Passes the Twist family plot surrounded by sagging sheep wire, a tiny fenced square on the welling prairie, a few graves and a few tilted gravestones, bright with plastic flowers.
The look on his face makes it clear he doesn't want to know that JACK is going in there, to be buried forever on the grieving plain.
[2004 screenplay]

« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 12:31:00 pm by Toast »

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"H" is hippies'
« Reply #13622 on: June 17, 2007, 11:03:04 am »
Our "western heroes" lived up to their name when they tackled the hippies' watery misfortune.

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"I" is incapacitated
« Reply #13623 on: June 17, 2007, 12:59:59 pm »
The hippies' VW bus had become incapacitated by a swollen creek.
« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 01:05:13 pm by Fran »

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"J" is joying
« Reply #13624 on: June 17, 2007, 01:22:29 pm »
Jack and Ennis wake up, joying to different degrees about their children and their habits:

INT: RIVERTON, WYOMING: MOTEL SIESTA: ROOM: NIGHT: 1967:

It's dark. We can make out clothes strewn around the room, some beer cans. The room blue with cigarette smoke.

The two boys appear to be sleeping. We hold on them for a
a beat.  Ennis awakens, rolls over, switches on the light, looks
at his watch, pulls out a cigarette; lights it. Jack awakens.
Ennis lights a cigarette for him, hands it to him.

          JACK
     You got a looker for a wife. (pause) She
     didn't seem too friendly, though...

          ENNIS
     Francine, she'll be two, looks just like
     her mom. Sweet hearted, but a mind of her
     own. Alma Jr., she's three, more like me,
     but smarter. Doesn't say much, but she's
     always watching out, nothin' much gets by
     her. (beat) I love those girls to pieces.

          JACK
     Yeah. Bobby -- that's my boy -- he's
     good. Some good laughs. But he sure does
     shit a lot. (pause) Damn. Four years.

[2004 screenplay]

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"L" is lackluster
« Reply #13625 on: June 17, 2007, 01:59:53 pm »
The deleted hippie scene was at best lackluster.

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"M" is mired
« Reply #13626 on: June 17, 2007, 02:10:03 pm »
Without the quick-thinking assistance of Jack and Ennis, the hapless hippies might have remained mired in the stream for a long time.
Ich bin ein Brokie...

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"N" is naggingly
« Reply #13627 on: June 17, 2007, 03:05:50 pm »
The deleted hippie scene rattles naggingly in the collective consciousness of Brokeback Mountain fans as they try to see and have all things Brokeback revealed to them.

« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 03:24:26 pm by Toast »

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"O" is offload
« Reply #13628 on: June 17, 2007, 03:32:44 pm »
Up ahead of the bus, they see a creek, swollen from runoff.  But the bus doesn't slow....

                    JACK
          Can't that fool see the creek's in flood?
 
                    ENNIS
          Probably high on drugs.  May not have even
          noticed that creek, music's too loud.
 
...and the bus, music blaring, heads right into the water.  Makes it halfway across... stops, water at window-height.  Yells are heard.
 
ENNIS and JACK lope down the ridge.

                    JACK
              (drawing rein)
          Hell, better go down and see what's what.
 
                    ENNIS
          See if you can get a rope on the bumper.
          I'll offload who I can.

[2004 screenplay]

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"P" is partially
« Reply #13629 on: June 17, 2007, 04:41:42 pm »
Ennis and Jack loped down the hill to find the hippies' Volkswagen bus partially submerged in a creek.
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