Human Interest and Two Crows Joy by MadLori

[MaineWriter]

Thank you for the new chapter!!
Lori, do you want any "spoiler" type discussion/opinions here, like what we do in LJ and ff.net?
Or is this mostly for letting us know about new chapters and/or Questions and our Answers/Opinions??
Just curious, don't want to start anything unwanted.

Speaking as a moderator, I would think spoiler type discussions are fine, as long as you preface your comment with a spoiler notation and some space. I, for one, would like to talk about some issues and I know Lori is open to discussing her stories.

Lori likes the chat, too, and tends to be there in the evening (she is in Ohio, so eastern time zone, US).

Leslie

[Kazza]

Hi there, just wanted to pitch in and say that Human Interest was the first fan fic that I really got into and was hooked from the start. It's so professionally written and it feels real to me - how life would have been for the boys had they decided (or shoud I say, had Jack convinced Ennis) to make a go of a life together.

In fact for quite a while I convinced myself that this was really how the story panned out, and not the story/film version. Does that make sense?

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Anyway - last couple of chapters - WOW! Go Ennis! I'm really hope that no backlash is visited upon him whilst Jack is away. As for Pa Twist, I kind of suspected the reason why he was calling, but I thought that it was he that was ill and he wanted to make his peace. Poor Jack - he is having a hell of a time isn't he?

Oh and post party scene - v hot. You write very good love scenes Lori. Sexy and hot, but tender too. “I’m fine enough? Darlin’, you could turn the Pope queer.” - Oh yes indeedy!!!!!

[MadLori]

Chapter 15:

http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/59641.html

[belbbmfan]

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“C’mere,” Ennis said, pulling him close. “Need a good-bye kiss.” He dipped his head and kissed Jack, softly. Jack shut his eyes, inhaling Ennis’s scent, storing up sense memories to recall lying alone in the dark with eyes closed. The sound of Ennis’s sleep-breathing, the trod of his footsteps, the roughness of his palms. The collection of perceptions that together made up that image of Ennis he held in his mind and carried with him wherever he went. You think I’m goin alone, darlin, Jack thought. What you don’t know is I’m takin you with me."


Madlori
Oh, that was just beautiful. So sweet. Loving with all your senses. Can these two be any more in love?
I hope we'll have a reunion scene very soon, but something tells me that Jack's trip home is going to be very rough, for both of them.
Thank you for this chapter.

[mvansand76]

Chapter 15? OMG- I need to keep up!

[littleguitar]

Chapter 15? OMG- I need to keep up!

LOL me too... when was ch. 15 posted?? I'm a wreck, too many fan fics, too little time! 

[Kazza]

Lori - another wonderful installment in your story. You write so well, your characters are so well rounded.

Chewing my nails now wondering what awaits Jack on his trip to Lightening Flat, especially as their parting felt like a goodbye. I'm still wondering if we've seen the last of Forrester.

Really looking forward to the next update.

[souxi]

OMG dont mention Forester!! Thing is, last time he wanted to get Ennis and he wasnt there.Now, Jack is gone and Ennis IS there, on his own!! OH Christ I shal worry myself silly now. 

[Kazza]

OMG dont mention Forester!! Thing is, last time he wanted to get Ennis and he wasnt there.Now, Jack is gone and Ennis IS there, on his own!! OH Christ I shal worry myself silly now. 

Oh my - I'm sorry Souxi. Didn't meant to stress you out there. I've got some fruit and nut left from last night, have a chunk and it might help take your mind off nasty things hapening to the boys.

[souxi]

Oh my - I'm sorry Souxi. Didn't meant to stress you out there. I've got some fruit and nut left from last night, have a chunk and it might help take your mind off nasty things hapening to the boys.

Yum yum thank you Karen, I love fruit and nut. I,m chewing my fingernails until the next update. I shall be thinking of Ennis, alone at night, and I shall be wondering whats lurking outside now!! . God almighty theres always something to give then two grief isnt there?