I love this story-it was one of my first fics so has a soft spot in my heart. This chapter, though, caused me to disconnect. It was kinda too much for me. Too many trials and tribulations for guys and I couldn't wrap my head around this latest one.
I'm still a big fan, stay eagerly await the next installment, just without any emotion.
I had this feeling of "too much", too. Not in this chapter, but some chapters ago. Additionally, it's frustrating to get not more than one chapter every month.
To be honest, I somehow let this story go. I still loved it for what it was (also one of my first fanfics - and oh my, how good and healing it had been for me, along with ALBFS), but gave up waiting eagerly for the next chapter to the point that I would have been unconcerned, had the story not been updated anymore.
But I still was interested enough to read the following chapter, when it showed, and the next, and the next...
... and now I'm hooked again. I think the showing up of KE was a very good turn for the story.
But I totally agree that Jack had been away for too long. And the loooong periods between updates are truly frustrating, especially with a cliffhanger.
I know that something called RL exists (does it?
) and don't hold the infrequent updates against Madlori (how could I) - but still the frustration remains.