Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3139710 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1480 on: July 27, 2006, 02:47:54 pm »
Ennis lowered himself seductively on Jack,
Savoring their first time in the sack
He don't need no lotion
Just his own locomotion
From this point onwards there was no turning back!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1481 on: July 27, 2006, 10:54:30 pm »
Another:


Ennis slipped a cold hand in Jack's jeans,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1482 on: July 27, 2006, 11:11:55 pm »
Ennis slipped a cold hand in Jack's jeans,
And Jack lay back, he knows what this means,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1483 on: July 27, 2006, 11:29:07 pm »
Ennis slipped a cold hand in Jack's jeans,
And Jack lay back, he knows what this means,
Jack moaned as Ennis got busy


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1484 on: July 27, 2006, 11:34:25 pm »
Ennis slipped a cold hand in Jack's jeans,
And Jack lay back, he knows what this means,
Jack moaned as Ennis got busy
Passion made him feel quite dizzy
« Last Edit: July 29, 2006, 02:58:17 pm by Pipedream »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1485 on: July 28, 2006, 12:00:40 am »
Ennis slipped a cold hand in Jack's jeans,
And Jack lay back, he knows what this means,
Jack moaned as Ennis got busy
Passion made him fell quite dizzy
They were randier than a pair o' lads in their teens.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1486 on: July 28, 2006, 10:52:40 am »
Good one! 8)

Jack's driving all day to meet his lover
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1487 on: July 28, 2006, 12:15:58 pm »
Jack's driving all day to meet his lover,
They kissed passionately, trying to take cover,
« Last Edit: July 28, 2006, 12:23:12 pm by Memento »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1488 on: July 28, 2006, 12:29:35 pm »
Jack's driving all day to meet his lover,
They kissed passionately, trying to take cover,
Their breathing uneven, oozing with lust


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1489 on: July 28, 2006, 04:55:51 pm »
Jack's driving all day to meet his lover,
They kissed passionately, trying to take cover,
Their breathing uneven, oozing with lust,
Their bodies entwined - so rugged, so robust,