Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1252270 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1500 on: July 29, 2006, 03:07:09 pm »
"I told ya it aint gonna be that way",
It's too big of a price to pay,
You've got your life, and I got mine,
our few meet-ups each year will be so fine,
For a few more occasions I'll pray!

 :-\

Another one:

With that boy next to him Jack was sleepless


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1501 on: July 29, 2006, 03:11:22 pm »
With that boy next to him Jack was sleepless,
regretting he hadn't seen fit to undress

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1502 on: July 30, 2006, 07:45:47 pm »
With that boy next to him Jack was sleepless,
regretting he hadn't seen fit to undress.
So he placed Ennis' had on lil Jack,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1503 on: July 30, 2006, 07:56:12 pm »
With that boy next to him Jack was sleepless,
regretting he hadn't seen fit to undress.
So he placed Ennis' hand on lil Jack, -
guiding Ennis onto the right track, -

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1504 on: July 31, 2006, 08:00:36 am »
With that boy next to him Jack was sleepless,
regretting he hadn't seen fit to undress,
So he placed Ennis's hand on lil Jack..
Guiding Ennis onto the right track,
Which made them both, completely breathless.




He stood and watched him drive away,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1505 on: July 31, 2006, 08:19:23 am »
He stood and watched him drive away,
He was left with anger and utter dismay,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1506 on: July 31, 2006, 11:31:20 am »
He stood and watched him drive away,
He was left with anger and utter dismay,
So a plan he hatched
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1507 on: July 31, 2006, 12:34:45 pm »
He stood and watched him drive away,
He was left with anger and utter dismay,
So a plan he hatched,
He had to become detached,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1508 on: July 31, 2006, 01:40:38 pm »
He stood and watched him drive away,
He was left with anger and utter dismay,
So a plan he hatched,
He had to become detached,
to keep complete despair at bay.  :'(

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1509 on: July 31, 2006, 02:49:42 pm »
Another:  :)

Jack, in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire