Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Mikaela]

Jack, in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire

[Katie77]

Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,

[Pipedream]

Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,
Never had he wanted something so much! 

[Lumière]

Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,
Never had he wanted something so much!
His lust for the blonde boy climbed higher and higher.

 


Ennis hugged the shirt close to his heart,

[Mikaela]

Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,

[Lumière]

Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,

[Mikaela]

Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,
those happy times he shared with Jack

[Lumière]

Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,
those happy times he shared with Jack
How had they managed 20 whole years apart?


  

Another Jack Nasty one: 

Jack hit the ground on his knees,

[Pipedream]

Jack hit the ground on his knees
Groaning: "Ennis, f*ck me, please!"

 

[Lumière]

Jack hit the ground on his knees
Groaning: "Ennis, f*ck me, please!",
Ennis was panting with urgent need 'n desire,