Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3408190 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1510 on: July 31, 2006, 02:53:39 pm »
Jack, in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1511 on: July 31, 2006, 04:11:12 pm »
Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1512 on: July 31, 2006, 04:46:42 pm »
Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,
Never had he wanted something so much! 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1513 on: July 31, 2006, 07:26:22 pm »
Jack,in his dark camp, saw Ennis as night fire,
a bright and shining symbol of desire,
He longed for the time, when their bodies would touch,
Never had he wanted something so much!
His lust for the blonde boy climbed higher and higher.

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Ennis hugged the shirt close to his heart,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1514 on: July 31, 2006, 08:34:15 pm »
Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1515 on: July 31, 2006, 10:53:45 pm »
Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1516 on: August 01, 2006, 04:45:04 am »
Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,
those happy times he shared with Jack

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1517 on: August 01, 2006, 11:44:01 am »
Ennis hugged the shirts close to his heart,
sting of tears made his eyes smart,
All the memories came flooding back,
those happy times he shared with Jack
How had they managed 20 whole years apart?


 :( 

Another Jack Nasty one:  :P

Jack hit the ground on his knees,



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1518 on: August 01, 2006, 11:56:54 am »
Jack hit the ground on his knees
Groaning: "Ennis, f*ck me, please!"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1519 on: August 01, 2006, 12:07:07 pm »
Jack hit the ground on his knees
Groaning: "Ennis, f*ck me, please!",
Ennis was panting with urgent need 'n desire,


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