Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 2905579 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1560 on: August 03, 2006, 06:40:36 pm »
"Four years!" sighed Jack, holding Ennis tight
during that steamy-hot motel-bed night

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1561 on: August 03, 2006, 07:40:40 pm »
"Four years!" sighed Jack, holding Ennis tight,
during that steamy hot motel bed night,
You know "it could always be this way"
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1562 on: August 03, 2006, 07:44:57 pm »
"Four years!" sighed Jack, holding Ennis tight,
during that steamy-hot motel-bed night.
"You know "it could always be this way.
Let's stay together - what do you say?"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1563 on: August 03, 2006, 08:58:22 pm »
Four years!" sighed Jack, holding Ennis tight,
during that steamy-hot motel-bed night.
"You know "it could always be this way.
Let's stay together - what do you say?"
To him, nothing could be more right.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1564 on: August 03, 2006, 10:22:39 pm »
Another:  ;)

He rolled her over, did quickly what she hated,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1565 on: August 03, 2006, 10:41:48 pm »
He rolled her over, did quickly what she hated,
She wasn't pleased but he was soon elated.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1566 on: August 03, 2006, 11:32:49 pm »
He rolled her over, did quickly what she hated,
She wasn't pleased, but he was soon elated,
He wished it was Jack, that he was pleasin'
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1567 on: August 03, 2006, 11:34:36 pm »
He rolled her over, did quickly what she hated,
She wasn't pleased, but he was soon elated,
He wished it was Jack, that he was pleasin'
Though he couldn't think of a particular reason.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1568 on: August 04, 2006, 12:30:10 am »
He rolled her over, did quickly what she hated,
She wasn't pleased, but he was soon elated,
He wished it was Jack, that he was pleasin'
Though he couldn't think of a particular reason.
He fantasized 'bout Jack till he was sated.

 ;)



Jack was constantly bitching about the cold,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1569 on: August 04, 2006, 04:17:05 am »
Jack was constantly bitching about the cold,
He needed someone warm to hold,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection