Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3271655 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1600 on: August 08, 2006, 01:28:54 am »

Was this the life that Ennis hoped for?
No!  His heart said that he needed more

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1601 on: August 08, 2006, 06:32:00 am »
Was this the life that Ennis hoped for?
No, his heart said that he needed more,
But Jack and him had said good-bye,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1602 on: August 08, 2006, 10:14:01 am »
Was this the life that Ennis hoped for?
No, his heart said that he needed more,
But Jack and him had said good-bye,
for Ennis that meant:"Till we die",

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1603 on: August 08, 2006, 12:18:23 pm »
Was this the life that Ennis hoped for?
No, his heart said that he needed more,
But Jack and him had said good-bye,
for Ennis that meant:"Till we die",
Jack felt defeated, heart-broken and sore.

 :-\


He staggered outta bed, peed in the sink


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1604 on: August 08, 2006, 03:24:47 pm »
He staggered outta bed, peed in the sink.
Sweet dreams of Jack better'n any shrink

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1605 on: August 08, 2006, 05:59:12 pm »
He staggered outtabed, peed in the sink,
Sweet dreams of Jack better'n any shrink,
He dreamt of a time, when love was new,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1606 on: August 08, 2006, 06:06:23 pm »
He staggered outtabed, peed in the sink,
Sweet dreams of Jack better'n any shrink,
He dreamt of a time, when love was new,
Hormones raged, and worries were a few.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1607 on: August 08, 2006, 06:15:59 pm »
He staggered outtabed, peed in the sink,
Sweet dreams of Jack better'n any shrink,
He dreamt of a time, when love was new,
Hormones raged, and worries were a few.
Now, the only relief was a drink...

 :'(

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1608 on: August 08, 2006, 07:36:38 pm »
If you dont want my kids, I'll leave you alone,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1609 on: August 09, 2006, 09:58:10 am »
If you dont want my kids, I'll leave you alone,
I'm trying my best, but you just moan and groan