Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3271394 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1610 on: August 09, 2006, 06:48:55 pm »
If you dont want my kids, I'll leave you alone
I'm trying my best, but you just moan and groan
To tell ya the truth, you bore me my dear

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1611 on: August 09, 2006, 06:50:45 pm »
If you dont want my kids, I'll leave you alone
I'm trying my best, but you just moan and groan
To tell ya the truth, you bore me my dear.
I'm sure as heck ain't being judged by no peer.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1612 on: August 09, 2006, 06:56:42 pm »
"If you dont want my kids, I'll leave you alone
I'm trying my best, but you just moan and groan
To tell ya the truth, you bore me my dear.
I'm sure as heck ain't being judged by no peer."
Ennis rolled off her, trying hard to ignore the 'bone'.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1613 on: August 09, 2006, 11:49:38 pm »
Alma stood at the window, watching them go

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1614 on: August 10, 2006, 09:23:30 am »
Alma stood at the window, watching them go,
She wan't really sure if she wanted to know,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1615 on: August 10, 2006, 09:39:05 am »
Alma stood at the window, watching them go,
She wasn't really sure if she wanted to know,
Was there some secret love between Ennis and Jack?,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1616 on: August 10, 2006, 10:47:06 am »
Alma stood at the window, watching them go,
She wasn't really sure if she wanted to know,
Was there some secret love between Ennis and Jack?,
Should she stay or should she start to pack?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1617 on: August 10, 2006, 11:20:07 am »
Alma stood at the window, watching them go,
She wasn't really sure if she wanted to know,
Was there some secret love between Ennis and Jack?
Should she stay or should she start to pack?
Perplexed, she shed tears of deep sadness and woe.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1618 on: August 10, 2006, 11:28:34 am »
He was driving to Ennis, now he was free,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1619 on: August 10, 2006, 11:51:26 am »
He was driving to Ennis, now he was free,
They could have a life together, he would finally agree,