Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3274817 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1640 on: August 18, 2006, 01:46:16 pm »
A chest crushing hug and two pairs of lips meeting...
After four fucking years, it was their way of greeting,
Off to a motel they sped
intent on jouncing a bed

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1641 on: August 18, 2006, 01:51:07 pm »
A chest crushing hug and two pairs of lips meeting...
After four fucking years, it was their way of greeting,
Off to a motel they sped
intent on jouncing a bed
On their innocent wives they were cheating...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1642 on: August 18, 2006, 02:00:11 pm »
LOL! And here I was completely expecting one of the Jack Nasty endings!  ;)

Let's start another one then:



So eager he knocked off Jack's hat,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1643 on: August 18, 2006, 03:35:21 pm »
So eager he knocked off Jack's hat,
Ennis was on fire, simple as that!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1644 on: August 19, 2006, 12:18:10 am »
So eager he knocked off Jack's hat,
Ennis was on fire, simple as that!
He trampled his toes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1645 on: August 19, 2006, 01:13:17 am »
So eager he knocked off Jack's hat,
Ennis was on fire, simple as that!
He trampled his toes,
And bumped into Jack's nose,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1646 on: August 19, 2006, 01:41:22 am »
So eager he knocked off Jack's hat,
Ennis was on fire,simple as that,
He trampled his toes,
And bumped into Jack's nose,
And his arse,with his hand,he did pat.



They pressed hard together, chest to chest,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1647 on: August 19, 2006, 02:02:45 am »
They pressed hard together, chest to chest,
After four long years, who would've guessed?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1648 on: August 19, 2006, 02:59:02 am »
They pressed hard together, chest to chest,
After four long years, who would've guessed?
A quick look down the street, then a passionate kiss

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1649 on: August 19, 2006, 03:01:40 am »
They pressed hard together, chest to chest,
After four long years, who would've guessed?
A quick look down the street, then a passionate kiss
It musta felt like sweet, heavenly bliss!