Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3405557 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1660 on: August 22, 2006, 06:02:39 pm »
Jack rolled on top of him, his hands everywhere,
At his beautiful body, his eyes roamed and stared,
His breath quicked as his heart raced.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1661 on: August 23, 2006, 12:19:35 am »
Jack rolled on top of him, his hands evrywhere,
At his beautiful body his eyes roamed and stared,
His breath quick as his heart raced,
His chest pressed, to the lover he faced,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1662 on: August 23, 2006, 07:45:52 am »
Jack rolled on top of him, his hands evrywhere,
At his beautiful body his eyes roamed and stared,
His breath quick as his heart raced,
His chest pressed, to the lover he faced,
He wished he could tell him how much that he cared.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1663 on: August 26, 2006, 03:17:42 am »
He once had a dream, of them living together
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1664 on: August 26, 2006, 07:14:01 am »
He once had a dream, of them living together,
and they'd never let go, come hell or foul weather.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1665 on: August 26, 2006, 11:49:56 pm »
He once had a dream, of them living together,
and they'd never let go, come hell or foul weather.
Just them two,  come sun or rain.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1666 on: August 27, 2006, 04:44:19 am »
He once had a dream, of them living together,
and they'd never let go, come hell or foul weather.
Just them two,  come sun or rain.
But reality bites, dreams get drained

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1667 on: August 27, 2006, 11:01:58 pm »
He once had a dream of them living together,
and they'd never let go, come hell or foul weather.
Just them two, come sun or rain.
But reality bites, dreams get drained.
He thought that apart their lives would be better.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1668 on: August 28, 2006, 07:58:31 am »
"Am I goin too fast?" she said with a smile,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1669 on: August 28, 2006, 09:21:29 pm »
"Am I goin too fast?" she said with a smile,
"I could slow down, although I wanna run a mile".