Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3223909 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1730 on: September 12, 2006, 06:12:23 pm »
They went skinny-dipping in the lake,
To cool them off, after the love they did make,
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1731 on: September 12, 2006, 06:26:17 pm »
They went skinny-dipping in the lake,
To cool them off, after the love they did make,
The sight of naked Jack got Ennis hot..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1732 on: September 12, 2006, 08:44:11 pm »
They went skinny-dipping in the lake,
To cool them off, after the love they did make,
The sight of naked Jack got Ennis hot..
And thus did his manhood swell quite a lot,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1733 on: September 13, 2006, 03:41:45 am »
They went skinny-dipping in the lake,
To cool them off, after the love they did make,
The sight of naked Jack got Ennis hot..
And thus did his manhood swell quite a lot,
So they f*cked until morning did break...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1734 on: September 13, 2006, 06:44:09 am »
looks like we are getting into the "nasty" ones again....



He felt Jack's  hand,where a man aint been,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1735 on: September 13, 2006, 01:57:40 pm »
He felt Jack's  hand,where a man aint been,
And felt torn for what he sensed to be sin,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1736 on: September 13, 2006, 02:05:17 pm »
He felt Jack's  hand,where a man aint been,
And felt torn for what he sensed to be sin,
But Jack's touch felt so good ..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1737 on: September 13, 2006, 02:10:12 pm »
He felt Jack's hand,where a man ain't been,
And felt torn for what he sensed to be sin,
But Jack's touch felt so good
He was soon sporting wood...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1738 on: September 13, 2006, 02:40:27 pm »
He felt Jack's hand,where a man ain't been,
And felt torn for what he sensed to be sin,
But Jack's touch felt so good
He was soon sporting wood...
In a little while, he was out and in ..


 8)  That was a limerick of the  Jack Nasty variety!

Continued ..

Jack groaned as a fist hit the ground ..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1739 on: September 13, 2006, 03:47:49 pm »
Jack groaned as a fist hit the ground...
Behind him, Ennis started to pound.

((Goodness, more Jack Nasty limericks? Well they are supposed to be dirty anyway.))
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