Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3408203 times)

Offline saucycobblers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1740 on: September 13, 2006, 04:15:39 pm »
Jack groaned as a fist hit the ground...
Behind him, Ennis started to pound.
Both thought 'Weren't never like this...'
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1741 on: September 13, 2006, 05:23:21 pm »
Jack groaned as a fist hit the ground...
Behind him, Ennis started to pound.
Both thought 'Weren't never like this...'
Amidst all the frenzy, they forgot they could kiss,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1742 on: September 13, 2006, 05:38:55 pm »
Jack groaned as a fist hit the ground...
Behind him, Ennis started to pound.
Both thought 'Weren't never like this...'
Amidst all the frenzy, they forgot they could kiss,
Shortly after, they were ready for another round ...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1743 on: September 13, 2006, 05:45:29 pm »
Another?

They lay naked as babies in the mountain air,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1744 on: September 13, 2006, 05:49:47 pm »
They lay naked as babies in the mountain air,
One was brunette, the other was fair

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1745 on: September 13, 2006, 05:51:35 pm »
They lay naked as babies in the mountain air,
One was brunette, the other was fair
Together they lay in a passionate embrace


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1746 on: September 13, 2006, 05:52:58 pm »
They lay naked as babies in the mountain air,
One was brunette, the other was fair
Together they lay in a passionate embrace
One covered with kisses the other one's face

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1747 on: September 13, 2006, 05:55:18 pm »
They lay naked as babies in the mountain air,
One was brunette, the other was fair
Together they lay in a passionate embrace
One covered with kisses the other one's face
Both feeling with the world they hadn't a care.
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1748 on: September 14, 2006, 06:25:38 am »
This aint no ones business but ours
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1749 on: September 14, 2006, 08:54:00 am »
This aint no ones business but ours
On the mountain, it's just us and the stars
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