Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

Face to face they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate they were brother to brother,
Sweet kisses, soft whispers they shared

[moremojo]

Face to face they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate they were brother to brother,
Sweet kisses, soft whispers they shared
Making no secret of how much they cared

[Katie77]

Face to face, they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate, they were brother to brother,
Soft kisses, so whispers they shared,
Making no secret of how much they cared,
Just being in love, and with one another....


***perfect****...(i love this one)


ok heres another....

How can this be "wrong", when it feels so right?

[moremojo]

How can this be "wrong", when it feels so right?
Lying beside you throughout the long night

[twistedude]

How can this be wrong when it feels so right?
Lying beside you throughout the long night
with lovely invasions
to suit all occasions
never were stars and moon half so bright.

[moremojo]

The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,

[Katie77]

The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,

[moremojo]

The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt; he clasped his hurt head,

[Katie77]

The feel of fleet fist, cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt, he clasped his hurt head,
He wiped on his shirt, the more that he bled,

[moremojo]

The feel of fleet fist, cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt, he clasped his hurt head,
He wiped on his shirt, the more that he bled,
The pain in his mind to stick.