Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3183406 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1760 on: September 14, 2006, 09:08:20 pm »
Face to face they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate they were brother to brother,
Sweet kisses, soft whispers they shared


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1761 on: September 14, 2006, 09:09:34 pm »
Face to face they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate they were brother to brother,
Sweet kisses, soft whispers they shared
Making no secret of how much they cared

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1762 on: September 14, 2006, 09:45:26 pm »
Face to face, they did press on each other,
In spirit and fate, they were brother to brother,
Soft kisses, so whispers they shared,
Making no secret of how much they cared,
Just being in love, and with one another....


***perfect****...(i love this one)


ok heres another....

How can this be "wrong", when it feels so right?

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1763 on: September 14, 2006, 09:51:56 pm »
How can this be "wrong", when it feels so right?
Lying beside you throughout the long night

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1764 on: September 15, 2006, 01:10:02 am »
How can this be wrong when it feels so right?
Lying beside you throughout the long night
with lovely invasions
to suit all occasions
never were stars and moon half so bright.
« Last Edit: September 15, 2006, 01:12:15 am by twistedude »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1765 on: September 15, 2006, 05:32:16 pm »
The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1766 on: September 15, 2006, 09:12:36 pm »
The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1767 on: September 15, 2006, 09:26:42 pm »
The feel of fleet fist cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt; he clasped his hurt head,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1768 on: September 15, 2006, 09:54:52 pm »
The feel of fleet fist, cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt, he clasped his hurt head,
He wiped on his shirt, the more that he bled,

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

moremojo

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1769 on: September 15, 2006, 10:00:52 pm »
The feel of fleet fist, cuts to the quick,
Feeling the blood on his lips, he did lick,
He spat in contempt, he clasped his hurt head,
He wiped on his shirt, the more that he bled,
The pain in his mind to stick.