Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3184477 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1770 on: September 16, 2006, 02:43:08 am »
Jack picked up the shirt, and hid it away,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1771 on: September 18, 2006, 10:44:56 am »
Jack picked up the shirt, and hid it away,
Awaiting that moment, upon some sweet day,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1772 on: September 20, 2006, 03:47:42 am »
Jack picked up the shirt, and hid it away,
Awaiting that moment, upon some sweet day,
When he'd be again in his lover's arms

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1773 on: September 20, 2006, 09:27:02 am »
Jack picked up the shirt, and hid it away,
Awaiting that moment, upon some sweet day,
When he'd be again in his lover's arms
Freed of all worries and alarms,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1774 on: September 20, 2006, 04:37:28 pm »
Jack picked up his shirt, and hid it away,
Awaiting the moment, upon some sweet day,
When he'd be again in his lover's arms,
Freed of all worries, and all alarms,
The day they accepted, they truely were gay.


The two shirts together, as Ennis did find,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1775 on: September 20, 2006, 04:42:07 pm »
The two shirts together, as Ennis did find,
Spoke of passion, hope and love left behind ..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1776 on: September 20, 2006, 05:39:50 pm »
The two shirts together, as Ennis did find,
Spoke of passion, hope and love left behind ..
Thus did a window onto Jack's soul open

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1777 on: September 20, 2006, 08:13:05 pm »
The two shirts together, as Ennis did find,
Spoke of passion, hope and a love left behind,
Thus did a window onto Jack's soul open,
Words of love, that were left unspoken,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1778 on: September 20, 2006, 08:18:54 pm »
The two shirts together, as Ennis did find,
Spoke of passion, hope and a love left behind,
Thus did a window onto Jack's soul open,
Words of love, that were left unspoken,
A love he felt with heart, body and mind.

:)

I'll start a wacky one ..

About the Thanksgiving Turkey, Bobby did whine


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1779 on: September 20, 2006, 08:23:15 pm »
About the Thanksgiving turkey, Bobby did whine,
You want me to eat, and its football time,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection