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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3233077 times)

Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1960 on: October 17, 2006, 07:35:58 pm »
His hands trembled as he held the postcard
Leaving Brokeback had been so hard
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1961 on: October 17, 2006, 07:39:43 pm »
His hands trembled as he held the postcard
Leaving Brokeback had been so hard
his heart raced as he thought of Jack
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1962 on: October 17, 2006, 07:42:19 pm »
His hands trembled as he held the postcard
Leaving Brokeback had been so hard
his heart raced as he thought of Jack
Could it really be that Jack was coming back
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1963 on: October 17, 2006, 07:45:15 pm »
His hands trembled as he held the postcard
Leaving Brokeback had been so hard
his heart raced as he thought of Jack
Could it really be that Jack was coming back
And of hope, and joy, he retrieved a shard.
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Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1964 on: October 17, 2006, 07:50:52 pm »
Gees I leave here for 30minutes, and theres two more completed limericks all ready.....everybody is in fine poet mood today.......

Heres a starter for another one.......

They were all alone, where no one could see,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1965 on: October 17, 2006, 08:09:58 pm »
They were all alone, where no one could see,
Jack thinking, here in these mountains just him an me.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1966 on: October 18, 2006, 02:32:53 pm »
They were all alone, where no one could see,
Jack thinking: here in these mountains just him an me.
Just how do I get him to stay here tonight?
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1967 on: October 18, 2006, 02:37:33 pm »
They were all alone, where no one could see,
Jack thinking: here in these mountains just him an me.
Just how do I get him to stay here tonight?
Some whiskey, some bright smiles, - I'll make 'im feel right!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1968 on: October 18, 2006, 02:41:47 pm »
They were all alone, where no one could see,
Jack thinking: here in these mountains just him an me.
Just how do I get him to stay here tonight?
Some whiskey, some bright smiles, - I'll make 'im feel right!
Let's see what I'm gonna set free...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1969 on: October 18, 2006, 03:05:56 pm »
How about

June 1963 a very cold moonlit night.
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