Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Katie77]

"He said", she said through tears, "'twas his favorite place"
Ennis felt the tears start to roll down his face.
"He said, he'd like his ashes there",

[Lumière]

"He said", she said through tears, "'twas his favorite place"
Ennis felt the tears start to roll down his face.
"He said, he'd like his ashes there",
"Where the bluebirds sing, that's where .."

[moremojo]

"He said", she said through tears, "'twas his favorite place"
Ennis felt the tears start to roll down his face.
"He said, he'd like his ashes there",
"Where the bluebirds sing, that's where .."
She hung up the phone, leaving two bereft of peace and grace.

[Katie77]

"Would you like to go up and see his room"

[jpwagoneer1964]

"Would you like to go up and see his room"
"Where Jack used to lay and stare at the moon."


Is that s closed enough ryme? If not I will change.

[Lumière]

"Would you like to go up and see his room"
"Where Jack used to lay and stare at the moon."
"Yes ma'am, I'd really like that," Ennis replied

[Katie77]

"Would you like to go up and see his room"
"Where Jack used to lay and stare at the moon."
"Yes ma'am, I'd really like that," Ennis replied
He just needed someplace, quiet, as he cried,

[jpwagoneer1964]

"Would you like to go up and see his room"
"Where Jack used to lay and stare at the moon."
"Yes ma'am, I'd really like that," Ennis replied
He just needed someplace, quiet, as he cried,
In that little room, where Jack had grown it became noon.

[Katie77]

He saw the bed, he saw the toy,

[jpwagoneer1964]

He saw the bed, he saw the toy,
He knew the man, now sees the boy.