Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235762 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2300 on: November 30, 2006, 08:07:03 pm »
"No ones business but ours" Jack said that day,
"I ain't queer," Ennis said, " I ain't that way.."


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2301 on: November 30, 2006, 08:10:46 pm »
"No ones business but ours" Jack said that day,
"I ain't queer," Ennis said, " I ain't that way.."
"But what about what happened last night?"
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2302 on: November 30, 2006, 08:12:14 pm »
"No ones business but ours" Jack said that day,
"I ain't queer," Ennis said, " I ain't that way.."
"But what about what happened last night?"
"When Ah wuz with you it just seemed right."
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2303 on: November 30, 2006, 08:40:36 pm »
"No ones business but ours" Jack said that day,
"I ain't queer," Ennis said, " I ain't that way.."
"But what about what happened last night?"
"When Ah wuz with you it just seemed right...
the best that I've had, I dare say!"




[or: "This cowboy flick sure ain't cliche!"]
« Last Edit: November 30, 2006, 11:57:13 pm by LauraGigs »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2304 on: December 02, 2006, 01:29:37 am »
Another..


He heard Jack's truck and dashed out the door,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2305 on: December 02, 2006, 02:29:35 am »
He heard Jack's truck and dashed out the door,
To greet his fine long-lost amour!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2306 on: December 02, 2006, 03:02:14 am »
He heard Jack's truck and dashed out the door,
To greet his fine long-lost amour!
His heart was pounding in his chest


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2307 on: December 02, 2006, 04:00:01 am »
He heard Jack's truck and dashed out the door,
To greet his fine long-lost amour!
His heart was pounding in his chest
- His little darlin' MosterBest

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2308 on: December 02, 2006, 11:37:54 am »
He heard Jack's truck and dashed out the door,
To greet his fine long-lost amour!
His heart was pounding in his chest
- His little darlin' MosterBest
Then he saw him, what he waited four years for!
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2309 on: December 02, 2006, 02:00:27 pm »
Someone start a new one ..!  Ok, I will ..  8)



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