Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

Dear Jack, my lover, my precious, my sweet,
you make my heart race. Feel the beat!
To feel your lips, press hard on mine,
You and me as one, just one more time,
Leaves me tingling from my head down to my feet!



 

[Katie77]

As Jack met Alma, he nodded and smiled,

[jpwagoneer1964]

As Jack met Alma, he nodded and smiled,
A simple girl, so sweet and mild.

[Katie77]

As Jack met Alma, he nodded and smiled,
A simple girl, so sweet and mild.
If she knew how much he loved "her" man

[jpwagoneer1964]

As Jack met Alma, he nodded and smiled,
A simple girl, so sweet and mild.
If she knew how much he loved "her" man
His face lit up by his side, more than she ever can.

[Katie77]

As Jack met Alma, he nodded and smiled,
A simple girl, so sweet and mild.
If she knew how much he loved "her" man
His face lit up by his side, morethan she ever can
Then he heard the sounds, the sounds of a child.


He mentioned his boy, "five months, smiles a lot",

[jpwagoneer1964]

He mentioned his boy, "five months, smiles a lot",
"Yeah" He beamed, "a son you got."

[Lumière]

He mentioned his boy, "eight months, smiles a lot",
"Yeah" He beamed, "a son you got."
"And I got me a wife, she's pretty as can be"





I changed the first line slightly .. 

[jpwagoneer1964]

He mentioned his boy, "eight months, smiles a lot",
"Yeah" He beamed, "a son you got."
"And I got me a wife, she's pretty as can be"
Ennis thinking 'You came all this way fer me.'

[Lumière]

He mentioned his boy, "eight months, smiles a lot",
"Yeah" He beamed, "a son you got."
"And I got me a wife, she's pretty as can be"
Ennis thinking 'You came all this way fer me.'
In a lil while, they were makin' love, wild and hot!



Another: 


They made wild love, burning with passion