Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3181272 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1590 on: August 06, 2006, 06:32:58 pm »

New one!  :)

The motor started up, after all 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1591 on: August 06, 2006, 06:38:33 pm »
The motor started up, after all
and Ennis felt in free fall

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1592 on: August 06, 2006, 07:20:14 pm »
The motor started up, after all
and Ennis felt in free fall.
The summer of their dreams had ended,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1593 on: August 06, 2006, 08:39:24 pm »
The motor started up, after all
and Ennis felt in free fall.
The summer of their dreams had ended,
All would be fine he pretended,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1594 on: August 06, 2006, 09:59:08 pm »
The motor started up, after all
and Ennis felt in free fall.
The summer of their dreams had ended,
All would be fine he pretended,
But then drove his fist into the brick wall.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1595 on: August 06, 2006, 10:13:03 pm »
He married Alma, that day in November
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1596 on: August 07, 2006, 09:28:57 am »
He married Alma, that day in November.
For her it was heaven, a day to remember

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1597 on: August 07, 2006, 01:46:46 pm »
He married Alma, that day in November,
For her it was heaven, a day to remember,
They honeymooned on snowy slopes,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1598 on: August 07, 2006, 06:08:42 pm »
He married Alma, that day in November,
For her it was heaven, a day to remember,
They honeymooned on snowy slopes,
emotions mixed: Regrets and hopes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1599 on: August 07, 2006, 06:47:32 pm »
He married Alma, that day in November,
For her it was heaven, a day to remember,
They honeymooned on snowy slopes,
Emotions mixed, regrets and hopes,
But thoughts of Jack, he could not surrender.



Was this the life that Ennis hoped for,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection