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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #250 on: January 31, 2007, 10:18:11 pm »
sigh.......  I just love this story.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #251 on: February 01, 2007, 11:42:39 am »
Leslie how many chapters are you planning on doing for TTVOT? The more the better obviously. Can never get tired of Jack and Ennis, just isnt possible. :) :)
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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #252 on: February 01, 2007, 11:52:46 am »
Quote from: souxi on February 01, 2007, 11:42:39 am
Leslie how many chapters are you planning on doing for TTVOT? The more the better obviously. Can never get tired of Jack and Ennis, just isnt possible. :) :)

I actually have no idea. I told someone the other day, the only real benchmark for me when I began writing this was the July 4th party. That's coming to a close, but I don't feel like the story is coming to a close. And KE has surprised me, becoming much more of a person than I expected. I think he has something up his sleeve, too. We'll see.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #253 on: February 02, 2007, 12:56:02 am »
I left my comments for this one on FF.net--it was good, and I agree with you, I am feeling more in the story with KE, and there are a lot of directions that could go before it is done.  Very nice development of him in this story, I appreciate the emotional growth he is showing too, very well put together.
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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #254 on: February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm »
Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL

Through The Veil Of Time

Chapter 31. Making More Memories

http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29125.html

Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.

Hugs,

Leslie
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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #255 on: February 04, 2007, 06:50:21 pm »
Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm
Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL

Through The Veil Of Time

Chapter 31. Making More Memories

Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.

Hugs,

Leslie
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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #256 on: February 04, 2007, 07:02:27 pm »
Quote from: opinionista on February 04, 2007, 06:50:21 pm
Where's the link?

Fixed! Thanks Natali...

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #257 on: February 05, 2007, 09:50:36 am »
Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm
Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL

Through The Veil Of Time

Chapter 31. Making More Memories

http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29125.html

Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.

Hugs,

Leslie
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LOL! And we appreciate it!

Leslie, it's -21 degrees outside, but this chapter left me with such a feeling of warmth and hope!!  You've handled K.E.'s awakening so beautifully . . . how could anyone deny the truth of Jack and Ennis's love.

Thank you, Leslie - another amazing chapter.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #258 on: February 06, 2007, 04:23:25 pm »
Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm
Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL

Through The Veil Of Time

Chapter 31. Making More Memories

http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29125.html

Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.

Hugs,

Leslie
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Leslie,

I just love your guys so much. ~~~ sigh

The interaction between them is so beautiful and rings so realistic. I loved this part:

He turned to Ennis for a more enthusiastic hug, then said in a loud stage whisper, easily heard by most of the guests, “Told ya so.”

“You sure did, but ya won fair and square, with the people votin’, no one can accuse ya of bribin’ the judges.”

“Sleepin’ with, more like,” said Jack, this in a very soft whisper directly in Ennis’s year, who, as he heard the words, blushed bright red to the roots of his hair.
I swear I can see them on stage having that conversation. lol


And this one too:

“Now don’t go butterin’ me up with hugs and kisses,” he said, “because I ain’t dancin’ with ya when the band arrives…”

“Ah, En…” Jack sighed.

“I could tell that’s what you were doin’.”

“Just one lil dance?”

I can so see Jack's face...almost pouting...asking for just 'one lil dance...' :)

Your J & E keep me smiling for days. Thank you!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #259 on: February 10, 2007, 10:22:43 am »
I loved the "I told you so"  A little crowing on Jack's part is appropriate !  LOL
KE catching E & J in a sweet intimate moment.  This is love he sees here.
A love that has lasted 30 years. 

Leslie, this story always puts a smile on my face, and warms my heart.

Love you,

Karen
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