Author Topic: Zero at the Bone by MadLori  (Read 105468 times)

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #150 on: October 11, 2007, 02:22:38 pm »
SPOILERS










This is like sitting on the edge of your seat and watching a movie - a really intelligent, top-notch thriller/love story.  Awesome and amazing.  Both these guys are so damn smart, but, yet, so damn human. 

That wouldn’t do for Jack. He’d have better. Someday.

That killled me.  And I'm scared.  Really scared.  There are bad, bad people after them and I can't help but believe that bad, bad things are going to happen before everything gets worked out...eventually. 

But I'd rather think about D's gift to Jack:




Marie

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Didn't you just love the last lines of this chapter?

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #151 on: October 11, 2007, 08:16:15 pm »
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Didn't you just love the last lines of this chapter?


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“This ain’t Halloween.”

“What’s that mean?”

“Means I ain’t sharin my candy. Gimme them glasses.”



 :laugh: It's always so out-of-the-blue when D makes a joke - and this one especially - it just makes it even funnier! And it was so welcome, after such intensity!

Marie

The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #152 on: October 13, 2007, 04:59:38 pm »
I just heard through the grapevine that Lori has another update planned for THIS WEEKEND! Yeeeeeeh!

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #153 on: October 13, 2007, 06:21:26 pm »
Cool!  She definitely seems to be on a great roll with this story.

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I love, love, love that X turned out to be a woman.  And the way they met on the roof was so clever.
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #154 on: October 13, 2007, 06:43:22 pm »
Pops in to say:

I'm also totally in love with this fic. It's soooo good.

Oh, the tension of D and Jack being apart - Jack a hunted man and D hunting the hunters.... I'm sure there are some nail-biting action-packed edge-of-your-seat scenes to come!

*cheers*




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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #155 on: October 14, 2007, 01:05:19 am »
I just heard through the grapevine that Lori has another update planned for THIS WEEKEND! Yeeeeeeh!

Yes, indeed!  You're right.

Here's chapter 21

http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/88440.html


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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #156 on: October 14, 2007, 04:04:24 am »

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #157 on: October 14, 2007, 02:02:41 pm »


Definitely!  The suspense is getting really intense with this story! 8)


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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #158 on: October 14, 2007, 02:24:22 pm »
Yep.  Nerve-wracking, suspenseful and intense.  To the nth degree.

I'M SCARED!!!

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #159 on: October 16, 2007, 12:44:41 am »
Yeehaw!!

Yet another update.

Here's chapter 22

http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/88920.html

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