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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1390 on: January 17, 2007, 12:55:25 pm »

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1391 on: January 17, 2007, 01:43:47 pm »
Chapter 21 ends when E & E go into the bedroom.
Chapter 23 ends with Dupree and Nick going to the bedroom .

Let me guess , the next chapter ends with Pookie and Simon going to the .............

There's gonna be a lot of making up sex in the next couple of chapters  ;D

I really think Simon should apoligise to Lauren , he was way to hard on him . Lauren didn't deserve that kind of humiliation .

I'm going to have to rest up to write all of that makeup sex!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1392 on: January 17, 2007, 01:51:01 pm »
Nah , just write one chapter about one couple at the time  ;)

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1393 on: January 17, 2007, 01:58:19 pm »
Nah , just write one chapter about one couple at the time  ;)


 :laugh:  :laugh:

sounds like a cunning plan if you ask me!  :P
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1394 on: January 17, 2007, 02:02:28 pm »
Goodday all!

I am up to Chapter 10 (I think) of the current tale.

*spoilers*


My heart was breaking with Ennis weeping in the stable .. :-\
Hard to watch him suffering with all the guilt tearing him up inside.
Was a sweet chapter with Ellery comforting him and just being there to understand.
Lovely.


And ..OMG, Pookie wore a leopard jockstrap and did a bikini dance for Simon?  ;D Heehee..
And trust Wayne with his big mouth to blab it all out! Teehee..
Never tell a Wayne your secret, Lauren oughta know that by now ..
Wayne's mouth is like a 7-11, always open ..lol


Oh..and I hope there is more ahead about Jeevesy and the MartiniMan...

Exciting stuff!   ;)
« Last Edit: January 17, 2007, 02:05:42 pm by Lucise »


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1395 on: January 17, 2007, 06:11:00 pm »
okay gang.  My threat apparently worked and there is all sorts of traffic for my fantasy story so I am rewarding all of those faithful readers with another chapter of "A Small Circle of Friends."

http://louisev.livejournal.com/202730.html  "24.  Feisty"

« Last Edit: January 17, 2007, 06:39:53 pm by louisev »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1396 on: January 17, 2007, 06:15:54 pm »
I am guessing that should be Ch. 24 Louise.  :)



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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1397 on: January 17, 2007, 06:41:02 pm »
I am guessing that should be Ch. 24 Louise.  :)



indeed!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1398 on: January 17, 2007, 06:53:05 pm »


Brilliant Louise .
I was a bit disappointed in Simon , but now that he realised what he had actually done to Lauren , he sure made up for his mistake .


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1399 on: January 17, 2007, 07:07:40 pm »
SPOILER




As I said on LJ, you handled that very deftly, Louise, as usual!  I'm very impressed because that wasn't simply a disagreement to be resolved.  Nicely done.

Did anyone else notice that Lauren said "my" party? Was that just a slip of the tongue?  Because if it wasn't, let's hope Ellery is in a less sarcastic mood when he disabuses Lauren of that notion or Simon is going to have a crying Pookie on his hands again! 

Thanks, Louise!

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