Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 3166843 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5820 on: October 23, 2006, 05:43:58 pm »
Rice cakes!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5821 on: October 23, 2006, 05:55:46 pm »
Rice cakes!

Blimey - they never have that effect on me. Then again you also have Ellery and Ennis scampering around in your fevered imagination. I'm sure that's more than enough to keep a girl inspired. ;D

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5822 on: October 23, 2006, 06:21:14 pm »
Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/139310.html  "Chapter 54:  Confidences"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5823 on: October 24, 2006, 07:43:19 am »
... uh oh, did I write a bad chapter?...
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5824 on: October 24, 2006, 07:56:06 am »
... uh oh, did I write a bad chapter?...

Bad chapter? Why do you say that? It wasn't bad at all. It was a cliff hanger! I guess people are busy or sleeping and haven't had a chance to comment on it.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5825 on: October 24, 2006, 07:57:35 am »
God, no, not at all Louise.

Been hectic here this morning.

Was just thinking that as much as I adore Ennis/ Ellery scenes (and I do), I do love the interaction between the staff/patrons of the Red Stallion, especially the teasing of Lance. He must be mortified to think that so many people have seen him ‘perform’. Can’t wait for Ennis’s next shift. He’ll certainly be looking at certain people in a different light.

On second thoughts, wasn’t Ennis sneaking a peek at Lance’s physique at one point. Mmmmm… wonder how he feels post viewing? That could certainly prove interesting.

I think that you’ve left us all wondering what on earth Jeeves is about to impart to Dupree.

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5826 on: October 24, 2006, 08:11:09 am »
oh that's right, the Jeeves cliffhanger part.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5827 on: October 24, 2006, 08:24:17 am »
**typity type type.**
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5828 on: October 24, 2006, 08:58:41 am »
**typity type type.**

Gonna have to keep refereshing now  ;D

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5829 on: October 24, 2006, 09:30:48 am »
here it is.

Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/139588.html  "Chapter 55:  The Valet Did It"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”