Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 3503650 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4530 on: September 26, 2006, 05:52:27 am »
Update to "The Long Way Home"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/121497.html  "Chapter 70:  A Father's Worry"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4531 on: September 26, 2006, 07:51:02 am »
Update to "The Long Way Home"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/121679.html  "Chapter 71: A Bad Night"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4532 on: September 26, 2006, 08:41:19 am »
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Update to "The Long Way Home"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/121679.html  "Chapter 71: A Bad Night"

This wasn't a bad night. This was a complete shitty night, it couldn't have been worse. POOR DUPREE! Now Ellery and Ennis's vacations are definitely cut short. However, I'm thinking  that maybe it's the best it can happen to them right now, because Ellery with a dislocated rib, and Junior with all her troubles and becoming a pest on top of it all, they won't be able to go back to Dubois. There's no point to go back to Dubois if Ellery is going to be in pain, and Ennis is going to be all worried about Junior.

Anyway Louise, it was great to have a new chapter to read while eating lunch!  :-*
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4533 on: September 26, 2006, 09:16:22 am »
huh?  I wasnt quite sure what you meant by cutting the vacation short.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4534 on: September 26, 2006, 09:26:09 am »
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huh?  I wasnt quite sure what you meant by cutting the vacation short.

Didn't mean anything in particular, just speculating about what is happening. Thinking out loud that is!  ;D
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4535 on: September 26, 2006, 10:33:44 am »
speculate away!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4536 on: September 26, 2006, 10:50:33 am »
But I would think it's natural that Ellery returns to Laramie to deal with this disaster.  Besides, didn't you say you can't write their 'vacation' for another few more days?  But the problem is how is Ellery going to endure the drive back?

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4537 on: September 26, 2006, 10:59:04 am »
...uhhh... I didn't say they have to go back to Laramie now.  I'm not sure what you're talking about.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4538 on: September 26, 2006, 11:07:54 am »
But I would think it's natural that Ellery returns to Laramie to deal with this disaster.  Besides, didn't you say you can't write their 'vacation' for another few more days?  But the problem is how is Ellery going to endure the drive back?
That's just it, he's in no fit state to sit up properly yet, so how can he endure the car drive??  :(
What a mess.... :(
And yes, my poor sweet Dupree  :'(

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4539 on: September 26, 2006, 11:15:15 am »
That's just it, he's in no fit state to sit up properly yet, so how can he endure the car drive??  :(
What a mess.... :(
And yes, my poor sweet Dupree  :'(

Exactly, he isnt in any fit state to endure that drive, it,ll make him worse, IMO. Anyway, tbo, I,m not sure theres much he can do by driving back to Laramie anyway. Dupree is in the best place and as long as Ellery is kept up to date on his condition, there isnt much else he can do. Poor Dupree though. What a night!! :o :o