Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1138166 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #110 on: May 30, 2006, 05:31:32 pm »
'Twas a cold summer night on the mountain
Next to the warm whiskey fountain,
little bluebirds were singin'

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #111 on: May 30, 2006, 05:35:08 pm »
'Twas a cold summer night on the mountain
Next to the warm whiskey fountain,
little bluebirds were singin'
And the church bells were ringin'
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #112 on: May 30, 2006, 05:40:40 pm »
'Twas a cold summer night on the mountain
Next to the warm whiskey fountain,
little bluebirds were singin'
And the church bells were ringin'
As his love for Jack did Ennis make plain!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #113 on: May 30, 2006, 05:41:26 pm »
Ooooh, that's naughty  ;D. And there was me thinking we were actually gonna have a clean (lordy, even sweet!) one. Heehee...

"What blue eyes you have, Jack" said Ennis,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #114 on: May 30, 2006, 05:42:37 pm »
Did you just clean up your last line Lucise? :D
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #115 on: May 30, 2006, 05:49:34 pm »
"What blue eyes you have, Jack" said Ennis,
"Never would I do you a disservice",



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SaucyC - I did!  :laugh:
The line I had before was:  "And his place on Jack did Ennis maintain"
But maintain didn't really rhyme well, or does it?  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #116 on: May 30, 2006, 05:55:38 pm »
"What blue eyes you have, Jack" said Ennis,
"Never would I do you a disservice",
"I'll stare into those orbs"
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #117 on: May 30, 2006, 05:58:15 pm »
The line I had before was:  "And his place on Jack did Ennis maintain"
But maintain didn't really rhyme well, or does it?  ;D

Well, whatever  Lucise - it made me laugh! :laugh:
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #118 on: May 30, 2006, 07:00:07 pm »
"What blue eyes you have, Jack" said Ennis,
"Never would I do you a disservice",
"I'll stare into those orbs",
"My entire universe your love perturbs",


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #119 on: May 30, 2006, 09:02:36 pm »
"What blue eyes you have, Jack" said Ennis,
"Never would I do you a disservice",
"I'll stare into those orbs",
"My entire universe your love perturbs",
"Lord knows your hand belongs on my penis"!


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