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Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1420 on: July 24, 2006, 02:12:15 pm »
Ennis woke up sweating from his nightmare:
Jack murdered in front of his own helpless stare,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1421 on: July 24, 2006, 02:53:29 pm »
Ennis woke up sweating from his nightmare:
Jack murdered in front of his own helpless stare,
He saw his pillow was wet with tears,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1422 on: July 24, 2006, 02:59:57 pm »
Ennis woke up sweating from his nightmare:
Jack murdered in front of his own helpless stare,
He saw his pillow was wet with tears,
a legacy of tire irons and leers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1423 on: July 24, 2006, 03:04:39 pm »
Ennis woke up sweating from his nightmare:
Jack murdered in front of his own helpless stare,
He saw his pillow was wet with tears,
a legacy of tire irons and leers,
If only he'd shown him how much he could care.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1424 on: July 24, 2006, 03:06:02 pm »
 :'( :'( :'( *Sniff*... let's lighten it up a little...

Jack stared as Ennis dropped his drawers,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1425 on: July 24, 2006, 03:12:22 pm »
Jack stared as Ennis dropped his drawers,
He pounced on Ennis, no time to pause.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1426 on: July 24, 2006, 05:26:14 pm »
Jack stared as Ennis dropped his drawers,
He pounced on Ennis, no time to pause.
"You're what I want for dinner
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1427 on: July 24, 2006, 05:32:22 pm »
Jack stared as Ennis dropped his drawers,
He pounced on Ennis, no time to pause.
"You're what I want for dinner
And if you say I'm a sinner
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1428 on: July 24, 2006, 05:37:48 pm »
Jack stared as Ennis dropped his drawers,
He pounced on Ennis, no time to pause.
"You're what I want for dinner
And if you say I'm a sinner
I'll gladly go down on all fours!  ;)

Another one...

Ennis awoke from his sleepy doze
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1429 on: July 24, 2006, 05:58:10 pm »
Ennis awoke from his sleepy doze
to Jack's loving whispers 'bout stemming the rose