Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3406241 times)

Offline memento

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1460 on: July 26, 2006, 05:59:18 pm »
Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
and realized his feelings for him were deepening,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1461 on: July 26, 2006, 06:03:17 pm »
Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
and realized his feelings for him were deepening.
He wanted to kiss that lovely face

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1462 on: July 26, 2006, 06:08:15 pm »
Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
and realized his feelings for him were deepening.
He wanted to kiss that lovely face
And with his fingers his contours trace
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1463 on: July 26, 2006, 06:27:34 pm »
Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
and realized his feelings for him were deepening.
He wanted to kiss that lovely face
And with his fingers his contours trace.
He sighed, "Ennis, how you set my heart a-leaping!"


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1464 on: July 26, 2006, 06:31:10 pm »
Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
and realized his feelings for him were deepening.
He wanted to kiss that lovely face
And with his fingers his contours trace.
He sighed, "Ennis, how you set my heart a-leaping!"

Awww, that one's so sweet!  :)

On another romantic note...


Jack wrapped his arms around Ennis's chest,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1465 on: July 26, 2006, 06:51:11 pm »
Jack wrapped his arms around Ennis's chest,
Closed his eyes and dreamed of the rest.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1466 on: July 26, 2006, 07:14:32 pm »
Jack wrapped his arms around Ennis's chest,
Closed his eyes and dreamed of the rest:
A sweet life together

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1467 on: July 26, 2006, 07:30:13 pm »
Jack wrapped his arms around Ennis's chest,
Closed his eyes and dreamed of the rest:
A sweet life together
Let's stay together
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1468 on: July 26, 2006, 10:27:32 pm »
Jack wrapped his arms around Ennis's chest,
Closed his eyes and dreamed of the rest,
A sweet life together,
Lets stay together,
This love of ours is surely the best...




I'm glad you left that 'monica home,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1469 on: July 27, 2006, 09:56:10 am »
I'm glad you left that 'monica home,
the sound it makes causes the sheep to roam!