Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3407737 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1630 on: August 14, 2006, 06:45:48 pm »
He's a bit of a lair, showin' off on his horse,
I sure as heck noticed, but of course,
If he rides me, like he rides that filly,
You can be sure my willy won't be nilly!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1631 on: August 15, 2006, 01:57:05 pm »
He's a bit of a lair, showin' off on his horse,
I sure as heck noticed, but of course,
If he rides me, like he rides that filly,
You can be sure my willy won't be nilly!
And I will not have any remorse!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1632 on: August 15, 2006, 02:32:41 pm »
Yes, we have been quiet here lately .. Let's rev it up folks!  :)
A Jack Nasty one ..


One touch from Ennis and it started to weep,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1633 on: August 15, 2006, 06:57:34 pm »
One touch from Ennis and it started to weep,
One thing was sure; they weren't getting any sleep,
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1634 on: August 16, 2006, 09:06:06 am »
One touch from Ennis, and it started to weep,
One thing was sure;they weren't getting any sleep,
Their bodies were hot, as they tasted thier lust,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1635 on: August 16, 2006, 11:06:59 am »
One touch from Ennis, and it started to weep,
One thing was sure;they weren't getting any sleep,
Their bodies were hot, as they tasted their lust,
Their passion rose with every thrust...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1636 on: August 16, 2006, 09:32:55 pm »
One touch from Ennis, and it started to weep,
One thing was sure;they weren't getting any sleep,
Their bodies were hot, as they tasted their lust,
Their passion rose with every thrust...
And sated desires, deeper than deep.

(Ack! Someone else want to try?)
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1637 on: August 16, 2006, 11:14:56 pm »
A chest crushing hug and two pairs of lips meeting...   :)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1638 on: August 18, 2006, 02:08:25 am »
A chest crushing hug and two pairs of lips meeting...
After four fucking years, it was their way of greeting,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1639 on: August 18, 2006, 01:35:30 pm »
A chest crushing hug and two pairs of lips meeting...
After four fucking years, it was their way of greeting,
Off to a motel they sped