Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3181981 times)

Offline David

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1800 on: September 24, 2006, 05:29:27 am »
"You Bet!" he wrote back, and his heart skipped a beat,
His excitement grew, felt like he was in heat,
Told Alma about him, his fishin' bud Jack,
How they'd play and roll around in the sack
and every moment with Jack was a joyous treat.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1801 on: September 24, 2006, 02:21:43 pm »
How about:

The Mexican street swarmed with activity

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1802 on: September 24, 2006, 06:10:02 pm »
(I can see this one turning into a real "nasty)


The Mexican street, swarmed with activity,
Jack roamed the alleyways, looking for gaeity,

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1803 on: September 24, 2006, 06:13:35 pm »

The Mexican street, swarmed with activity,
Jack roamed the alleyways, looking for gaeity,


A tall, handsome amigo, sad Jack was looking to meet

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1804 on: September 24, 2006, 06:15:05 pm »
The Mexican street, swarmed with activity,
Jack roamed the alleyways, looking for gaeity,
A tall, handsome amigo, sad Jack was looking to meet
When he spotted a tasty young Mexican treat
« Last Edit: September 24, 2006, 06:17:44 pm by saucycobblers »
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1805 on: September 24, 2006, 09:37:09 pm »
The Mexican street swarmed with activity,
Jack roamed the alleyways, looking for gaeity,
A tall, handsome amigo, sad Jack was looking to meet
When he spotted a tasty young Mexican treat,
To hell with Ennis' insensitivity!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1806 on: September 24, 2006, 09:52:48 pm »
Another:  :)

Every time Monroe saw Alma, his heart skipped a beat


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1807 on: September 24, 2006, 09:54:26 pm »
Every time Monroe saw Alma, his heart skipped a beat
Either that or he was trippin' over his feet.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1808 on: September 24, 2006, 09:58:19 pm »
Every time Monroe saw Alma, his heart skipped a beat
Either that or he was trippin' over his feet.
He thought, 'Too bad she's stuck with Malboro man,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1809 on: September 24, 2006, 09:59:42 pm »
Every time Monroe saw Alma, his heart skipped a beat
Either that or he was trippin' over his feet.
He thought, 'Too bad she's stuck with Malboro man,
Cause if'n she weren't, I'd ask for her hand.'
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.