Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3231725 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2120 on: November 08, 2006, 03:27:56 am »
His words were trembling as he talked in the phone,
He felt his world collapse, down to the bone 
He asked Laureen, what happened to Jack,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2121 on: November 08, 2006, 03:33:51 am »
His words were trembling as he talked in the phone,
He felt his world collapse, down to the bone
He asked Laureen, what happened to Jack,
She talked of changing a tire, he knew she was being tact.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2122 on: November 08, 2006, 03:37:14 am »
His words were trembling as he talked in the phone,
He felt his world collapse, down to the bone
He asked Laureen, what happened to Jack,
She talked of changing a tire, he knew she was being tact.
The way she talked, was like she had a heart of stone.


She hung up the phone, it clicked in his ear,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2123 on: November 08, 2006, 03:48:38 am »
She hung up the phone, it clicked in his ear,
Jack he'd known, now gone what he'd held so dear
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2124 on: November 08, 2006, 04:08:25 am »
She hung up the phone, it clicked in his ear,
Jack he'd known, now gone what he'd held so dear
She mentioned his ashes, his wishes for them,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2125 on: November 09, 2006, 06:05:02 pm »
She hung up the phone, it clicked in his ear,
Jack he'd known, now gone what he'd held so dear
She mentioned his ashes, his wishes for them,
Back to the mountain, their heavenly gem,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2126 on: November 09, 2006, 06:30:29 pm »
She hung up the phone, it clicked in his ear,
Jack he'd known, now gone what he'd held so dear
She mentioned his ashes, his wishes for them,
Back to the mountain, their heavenly gem,
Off to Lightning Flat he thought as he shed a tear.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2127 on: November 09, 2006, 06:41:37 pm »
Okay .. gotta cheer it up in here!


"You're a sex bomb," Jack whispered in his ear,



 ;D CAn you guess what song I am listening to right now? ..lol


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2128 on: November 09, 2006, 06:46:56 pm »
"You're a sex bomb," Jack whispered in his ear,
As he kissed the cheek of his beautiful rear,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2129 on: November 09, 2006, 07:19:08 pm »
"You're a sex bomb," Jack whispered in his ear,
As he kissed the cheek of his beautiful rear.
"You make me sizzle and melt with one look,"