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Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2130 on: November 10, 2006, 04:11:32 pm »
"You're a sex bomb," Jack whispered in his ear,
As he kissed the cheek of his beautiful rear.
"You make me sizzle and melt with one look,
You're the hottest dude on earth, in my book...


Err... just a question. How can Jack whisper in Ennis' ear and kiss the cheek of his rear simultaneously??  :laugh:
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Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2131 on: November 10, 2006, 04:21:32 pm »
"You're a sex bomb," Jack whispered in his ear,
As he kissed the cheek of his beautiful rear.
"You make me sizzle and melt with one look,
You're the hottest dude on earth, in my book..."
His hands roaming up, down, here and there ..



Quote from: Pipedream on November 10, 2006, 04:11:32 pm
Err... just a question. How can Jack whisper in Ennis' ear and kiss the cheek of his rear simultaneously??  :laugh:

Do you need a diagram Anke?  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2132 on: November 10, 2006, 04:36:32 pm »
Quote from: Lucise on November 10, 2006, 04:21:32 pm
Do you need a diagram Anke?  ;D


Yes please!!!  ;D

In the meantime, let's start a new one...

Jack touched Ennis' face and unbuckled his belt
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Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2133 on: November 10, 2006, 05:06:37 pm »
Jack touched Ennis' face and unbuckled his belt
Lust, love and wanting, was what he felt,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2134 on: November 10, 2006, 05:41:37 pm »
Jack touched Ennis' face and unbuckled his belt
Lust, love and wanting, was what he felt.
Ennis' breath came hot and quick on his neck
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2135 on: November 10, 2006, 08:17:12 pm »
Jack touched Ennis' face and unbuckled his belt
Lust, love and wanting, was what he felt.
Ennis' breath came hot and quick on his neck
Then his zipper jammed and he thought: what the heck ?!

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Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2136 on: November 10, 2006, 08:27:37 pm »
Jack touched Ennis' face and unbuckled his belt
Lust, love and wanting, was what he felt.
Ennis' breath came hot and quick on his neck
Then his zipper jammed and he thought: what the heck ?!
He's so hot, zipper's fused, s'gonna melt ?!


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Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2137 on: November 12, 2006, 04:26:27 pm »
OK, seems I managed to kill the thread with that one!  :o Here's a new first line to (hopefully) get the action going again:


Think I left my damn heart up there,
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Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2138 on: November 12, 2006, 05:50:47 pm »
Think I left my damn heart up there,
These feelin' inside o' me, er more than I can bare.
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Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2139 on: November 12, 2006, 05:56:06 pm »
Think I left my damn heart up there,
These feelin' inside o' me, er more than I can bare.
No matter what I do, all I see is his face.
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