Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3182320 times)

Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2140 on: November 12, 2006, 06:02:16 pm »
Think I left my damn heart up there,
These feelin' inside o' me, er more than I can bare.
No matter what I do, all I see is his face.
Can't walk no more, can't keep this pace.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2141 on: November 12, 2006, 06:17:12 pm »
Think I left my damn heart up there,
These feelin' inside o' me, er more than I can bare.
No matter what I do, all I see is his face.
Can't walk no more, can't keep this pace.
She ain't no him, I want him, now and here!


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Another..

Some people want it all, I just want you


Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2142 on: November 13, 2006, 09:01:41 am »
Some people want it all, I just want you
Just want your love, because its true
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2143 on: November 13, 2006, 09:56:55 am »
Some people want it all, I just want you
Just want your love, because its true
I just live for our days in the mountain.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2144 on: November 13, 2006, 07:49:42 pm »
Some people want it all, I just want you
Just want your love, because its true
I just live for our days in the mountain.
When yer around, I gush like a fountain ..



lame ..yes! I know ..  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2145 on: November 13, 2006, 08:28:18 pm »
Some people want it all, I just want you
Just want your love, because its true
I just live for our days in the mountain.
When yer around, I gush like a fountain ..  (I thought of fountain too, but didnt know how to use it!!...well done)
When you're not here, I feel so blue.



This cant be wrong, when it feels so right,

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2146 on: November 13, 2006, 09:32:30 pm »
This cant be wrong, when it feels so right,
With your touch, I fly high as a kite.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2147 on: November 14, 2006, 12:19:18 am »
This cant be wrong, when it feels so right,
With your touch, I fly high as a kite.
With your kiss, I feel so loved
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2148 on: November 14, 2006, 02:32:06 pm »
Katie has done it now ..lol.. that'll be impossible to rhyme ..  ;D


This cant be wrong, when it feels so right,
With your touch, I fly high as a kite.
With your kiss, I feel so loved
Like a bird, I soar into the skies above.


Well, 'above' rhymes with love .. best I can do..lol


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2149 on: November 14, 2006, 02:46:24 pm »
This cant be wrong, when it feels so right,
With your touch, I fly high as a kite.
With your kiss, I feel so loved
Like a bird, I soar into the skies above.
Holding on to each other with all our might
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.