Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235144 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2180 on: November 16, 2006, 01:22:31 am »
Ennis walked into the shop, eyeing the postcard rack
He thought of all the cards he exchanged with Jack.
He bowed his head, as he fought back a tear


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2181 on: November 16, 2006, 02:31:12 am »
Ennis walked into the shop, eyeing the postcard rack
He thought of all the cards he exchanged with Jack.
He bowed his head, as he fought back a tear
He would buy this one last card, holding Jack near.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2182 on: November 16, 2006, 02:36:18 am »
Ennis walked into the shop, eyeing the postcard rack
He thought of all the cards he exchanged with Jack.
He bowed his head, as he fought back a tear
He would buy this one last card, holding Jack near,
And dream of the fiery days they shared, up on Brokeback.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2183 on: November 16, 2006, 09:18:49 am »
Another?

Jack unbuckled his belt and said,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2184 on: November 16, 2006, 12:07:41 pm »
Jack unbuckled his belt and said,
the sight a you sure turns my head

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2185 on: November 17, 2006, 08:17:50 am »
Jack unbuckled his belt and said,
the sight a you sure turns my head
I aint queer, but you turn me on
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2186 on: November 17, 2006, 02:59:51 pm »
Jack unbuckled his belt and said,
the sight a you sure turns my head
I aint queer, but you turn me on
Tell you what, I'd rather have you than James Bond


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2187 on: November 17, 2006, 03:01:38 pm »
Jack unbuckled his belt and said,
The sight a you sure turns my head
I aint queer, but you turn me on
Tell you what, I'd rather have you than James Bond.
So c'mere darlin, strip and git on the bed!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2188 on: November 17, 2006, 03:02:55 pm »
Let's continue the Jack Nasty limerick!


Ennis tore off his clothes and his drawers,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2189 on: November 17, 2006, 06:09:14 pm »
Ennis tore off his clothes and his drawers,
And told Jack to get down on all fours,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection