Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235134 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2370 on: December 08, 2006, 10:44:04 pm »
Love me like there is no tomorrow
Love me true, and feel no sorrow
Too much time that has been wasted
And thru my lips, your love, I've tasted,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2371 on: December 09, 2006, 02:29:01 am »
Love me like there is no tomorrow
Love me true, and feel no sorrow
Too much time that has been wasted
And thru my lips, your love, I've tasted,
You are mine to have, not borrow.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2372 on: December 09, 2006, 02:33:05 am »
Aww.. that was so sweet!  :)


Another:


Ennis didn't know about it, until the postcard came


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2373 on: December 09, 2006, 02:37:42 am »
Ennis didn't know about it, until the postcard came
Just can't be, not his Jack, his flame.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2374 on: December 09, 2006, 08:19:07 am »
Ennis didn't know about it, until the postcard came
Just can't be, not his Jack, his flame.
The stamp "deceased", it stung his eyes,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2375 on: December 09, 2006, 08:27:48 am »
Ennis didn't know about it, until the postcard came
Just can't be, not his Jack, his flame.
The stamp "deceased", it stung his eyes,
He swallowed hard, to muffle his cries,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2376 on: December 09, 2006, 08:38:22 am »
Ennis didn't know about it, until the postcard came
Just can't be, not his Jack, his flame.
The stamp "deceased", it stung his eyes,
He swallowed hard, to muffle his cries,
He had to know, who was to blame.


He rang Laureen, he had to know,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2377 on: December 09, 2006, 09:49:32 am »
He rang Laureen, he had to know,
Her voice was cold, her emotions did not show,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2378 on: December 09, 2006, 11:52:58 am »
He rang Laureen, he had to know,
Her voice was cold, her emotions did not show,
It wasn't a mistake, he'd never see his Jack again.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2379 on: December 09, 2006, 12:27:36 pm »
He rang Laureen, he had to know,
Her voice was cold, her emotions did not show,
It wasn't a mistake, he'd never see his Jack again.
He lost his lover, he lost his friend,