Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235757 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2450 on: December 21, 2006, 02:46:13 pm »
The day seemed long, as he paced 'cross the room,
He was excited for a change, no depressing gloom


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2451 on: December 21, 2006, 03:18:25 pm »
The day seemed long, as he paced 'cross the room,
He was excited for a change, no depressing gloom
Was Jack really going to be here?
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2452 on: December 21, 2006, 05:46:42 pm »
The day seemed long, as he paced 'cross the room,
He was excited for a change, no depressing gloom
Was Jack really going to be here?
Would it all be the same--his touch as soft, his face as dear?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2453 on: December 21, 2006, 06:19:57 pm »
The day seemed long, as he paced 'cross the room,
He was excited for a change, no depressing gloom
Was Jack really going to be here?
Would it all be the same--his touch as soft, his face as dear
He would know, before long, he's arriving soon.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2454 on: December 23, 2006, 12:43:59 pm »
Before dawn, a red and white Ford pickup merges on the highway.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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« Reply #2455 on: December 23, 2006, 06:38:26 pm »
A Ford pickup merged on the highway
Before dawn - no light yet in the skyways

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2456 on: December 26, 2006, 08:13:39 am »
A Ford pickup merged on the highway
Before dawn - no light yet in the skyways
14 hours is alot a driving Lureen would say

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2457 on: December 26, 2006, 11:34:02 am »
A Ford pickup .merged on the highway
Before dawn - no light yet in the skyways
14 hours is alot a driving Lureen would say
What would make you drive all that way.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2458 on: December 26, 2006, 05:32:39 pm »
A Ford pickup merged on the highway
Before dawn - no light yet in the skyways
14 hours is alot a driving Lureen would say
What would make you drive all that way.
For lovin' you no longer come my way!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2459 on: December 26, 2006, 05:34:52 pm »
They took a few swigs of Old Rose