Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[LauraGigs]

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed

[Katie77]

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed
Their sexual hunger, finally fed,

[Pipedream]

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed
Their sexual hunger, finally fed,
They let their pants drop

 

[Katie77]

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed
Their sexual hunger, finally fed,
They let their pants drop
On the bed, they did flop,

[Lumière]

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed
Their sexual hunger, finally fed,
They let their pants drop
On the bed, they did flop,
And before long, Ennis gave Jack some h---


Sorry, I am being crude ..   Let me make up for it ..


"It could be just like this," he said with a smile

[LauraGigs]

"It could be just like this," he said with a smile
"We'd live, love — raise cattle in style!"

[Lumière]

"It could be just like this," he said with a smile
"We'd live, love — raise cattle in style!"
"Let's do it, Ennis!  What do you say?"

[Katie77]

"It could be just like this," he said with a smile
"We'd live, love — raise cattle in style!"
"Let's do it, Ennis!  What do you say?"
"Oh how I wish Jack, that it could be that way"

At the Siesta, they bounced on a bed
Their sexual hunger, finally fed,
They let their pants drop
On the bed, they did flop,
And before long, Ennis gave Jack some h---


Sorry, I am being crude ..   Let me make up for it ..

'ts awright....I thought of "head" too, for the second line, but wasnt game....

[Lumière]

"It could be just like this," he said with a smile
"We'd live, love — raise cattle in style!"
"Let's do it, Ennis!  What do you say?"
"Oh how I wish Jack, that it could be that way,
I can't live with you .. wait, let's give it a while.."


Continued:


Jack nodded wearily and lowered his head,

[Katie77]

Jack nodded wearily and lowered his head,
Thinkin' bout what Ennis just said,